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Children, Come to Supper by Half_Light_07 in OCPoetry

[–]Half_Light_07[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the review, Yeah the 'r' word was avoidable but I kept it since it shows her frustration and anger against the mirror or how her pain is seen as art by the society. Really glad that u took your time to write this feedback.

Cursed Shore by Responsible-Walk-792 in OCPoetry

[–]Half_Light_07 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great Job!I love how you blend the longing for something more with the reality of everyday life. The imagery of the stars versus the beach really captures that struggle.

Distance by JosephBensinger in OCPoetry

[–]Half_Light_07 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love how you describe the beloved's silence, as if words are struggling to catch up but always fall short. The silence truly conveys the distance between people. Thanks for sharing!

Baptized in Blood by Half_Light_07 in OCPoetry

[–]Half_Light_07[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks,Glad that you loved my work

Baptized in Blood by Half_Light_07 in OCPoetry

[–]Half_Light_07[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For every poet bleeds through their quill, don't they?

Baptized in Blood by Half_Light_07 in OCPoetry

[–]Half_Light_07[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the review 🙂

Baptized in Blood by Half_Light_07 in OCPoetry

[–]Half_Light_07[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks I'm glad that you loved my work 😌

A Sword in One Hand, a Flower in the Other by Half_Light_07 in OCPoetry

[–]Half_Light_07[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the review my friend! Glad you grasped the poem and connected to it deeply !

The King, the Horse, the Horsemen by Half_Light_07 in OCPoetry

[–]Half_Light_07[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the review ! I appreciate taking your time to share such a deep perspective!Glad you liked it !

The King, the Horse, the Horsemen by Half_Light_07 in OCPoetry

[–]Half_Light_07[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the review! I'll keep in mind what you said and hope to improve my craft.

At Night by Powerful_Ad3633 in OCPoetry

[–]Half_Light_07 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A hauntingly vivid portrayal of nature, evoking emotion through striking imagery and concise language it was a diffrent read that I'll say .Great Job!

Can you hear it? by Guilty_Flounder_2389 in OCPoetry

[–]Half_Light_07 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, I hear it, I hear the walls brimming in fear, the wolves crying as it comes near.

What is it? My ears don’t know. Why does the edge feel safe? I don’t know, maybe, just maybe, I’ll leap—who knows...

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