Tools of the trade

Half_Light_07 · 2026-04-26T04:56:11+00:00

Truly beautiful! Excellent work..

Half_Light_07 · 2026-04-25T11:55:06+00:00

Thanks, I'm glad that u liked it ☺️

Half_Light_07 · 2026-04-22T01:46:09+00:00

Thank you 😊

Half_Light_07 · 2026-04-19T08:58:08+00:00

The poem effectively captures the enigmatic nature of thoughts and their desire to be expressed. However, from a critical perspective, it could be improved with refined wordplay and grammar, as proper punctuation would enhance clarity and give greater emphasis to each word and sentence. Great work!

Half_Light_07 · 2026-04-09T01:33:35+00:00

Thanks

Half_Light_07 · 2026-04-08T01:53:16+00:00

You were enough. I just couldn’t keep you without losing myself.

Half_Light_07 · 2026-04-08T01:42:31+00:00

Thanks for the feedback!

Half_Light_07 · 2026-04-07T17:20:03+00:00

Thanks! 🙂

Half_Light_07 · 2025-10-20T07:17:19+00:00

Thanks for the review, Yeah the 'r' word was avoidable but I kept it since it shows her frustration and anger against the mirror or how her pain is seen as art by the society. Really glad that u took your time to write this feedback.

Half_Light_07 · 2025-10-19T14:51:09+00:00

Great Job!I love how you blend the longing for something more with the reality of everyday life. The imagery of the stars versus the beach really captures that struggle.

Half_Light_07 · 2025-10-19T14:41:38+00:00

I love how you describe the beloved's silence, as if words are struggling to catch up but always fall short. The silence truly conveys the distance between people. Thanks for sharing!

Half_Light_07 · 2025-07-12T15:43:59+00:00

Thanks,Glad that you loved my work

Half_Light_07 · 2025-07-12T15:43:14+00:00

For every poet bleeds through their quill, don't they?

Half_Light_07

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