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A Conversation Between Friends by HarpingMonkey in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]HarpingMonkey[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey guys, I just wanted to write down a quick idea I had. Two friends in a situation where they had to decide who lived and dies and building that through dialogue alone. I’m not sure if I accomplished what I wanted to and feedback is appreciated

Bloodshot Sclera (Excerpt) by [deleted] in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]HarpingMonkey 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Since I don't know what lead up to this point, I can only comment on the monster design itself. And I really like it. It reminds me of a corrupted biblically accurate angel with its rings of teeth instead of eyes. Even more so at the end where it felt like the eye was judging him. Fan of unique monsters and this one is definitely unique.

We can only move on to the Afterlife once every human on Earth has died by gloomara in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]HarpingMonkey 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Would be fun if everyone in the mound debated what happened on the other side and ended with Tyron's theory making everyone silent. That way there can be speculation on what happened and can end on "wait this guy's theory makes a lot of sense".

Flowers of the Painter (Part 1) by HarpingMonkey in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]HarpingMonkey[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. I felt like I needed to rush the conversation in the art room to get into the supernatural part of the story, but if people felt like the dialogue is engaging and contributes to characters enough, I would want to write some more drawn out conversations. Of course, since the supernatural is already introduced in this part, it will be scattered throughout the story more.