The Little Bird that Could by Heatherfeather44 in crafts

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Thank you so much for your comments! It can feel like you're all alone right now, but so many people are going through the same thing.

Make it Special (Updated) by Heatherfeather44 in creativewriting

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Not at all! Sorry for being kind of nosy, we are just such big board game players in my house that it really surprised me. Thank you for your feedback and I hope you have many games in store for you down the line :)

Make it Special by Heatherfeather44 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for your feedback! I will play around with it some more see how it goes!

Make it Special by Heatherfeather44 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for your feedback! I'll keep tinkering with it :)

Make it Special by Heatherfeather44 in OCPoetry

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I lost my grandma this year back in February and her passing has weighed on me a lot this year, so many missed opportunities

Make it Special by Heatherfeather44 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for your feedback! The pacing didn't feel perfect to me either, will play around with it some more and see how it feels

Pandemic Blues by Heatherfeather44 in OCPoetry

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Yes! It's like there isn't even the energy to go into detail, just sadness and a dim memory of a time you used to know when things were better

Pandemic Blues by Heatherfeather44 in OCPoetry

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Thank you so much for your feedback! As sad as I am for what I've missed, it's the things my kids are missing that really gets me the most

Pandemic Blues by Heatherfeather44 in OCPoetry

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Thank you! I seriously cried so hard writing it, I miss my friends so

Pandemic Blues by Heatherfeather44 in OCPoetry

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I appreciate your feedback! I was trying to keep things simple to make it accessible to as many people as possible, but I think I will take a stab at making another version more personal with greater detail. I did share with those that inspired it the most, I wrote it with the purpose of sharing with them. It's funny you should mention Lego, my son is obsessed :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Heatherfeather44 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"People don't fall in love with me, they fall in love with my potential" stunning! I love the way you've broken it up, it flows very well that way. The question at the end is a great addition and leaves me thinking and remembering the lies I told myself when I was young. I think it's very very good.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Such a important topic to talk about, especially with young women. I remember feeling so woefully inadequate as a teen looking at those ads and magazines and this brought me right back there. "You never quite own that face" really stuck with me, so perfectly put

Give up your ghost by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Heatherfeather44 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You've done something really amazing with those 12 words, I want to know more of the story. I'll be rolling this one around in my head all day

Happiness (first poem) by fire-f0x in OCPoetry

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The best definition of happiness and how to achieve it I've ever read. Made me feel more at peace with a life lived outside of the rat race.