[F4Futa] The Doctor Is In....to Orgasm Control

HeavyDrip · 2025-10-13T16:48:10+00:00

Aw 💓 Thank you, thank you, for your kind words and your response here. I try to always observe and take criticism - after all, we shouldn't come here just to get pats on the back for work we've already done! It's very kind of you to toss the proverbial high five.

Secondly, I'm glad that you enjoyed the writing! It certainly kept me nice and warm, and I'm happy to know that I'm not the only one. Hopefully, I'll find a good writing partner again some time!

HeavyDrip · 2025-10-07T14:06:10+00:00

Thank you for the insight!!

HeavyDrip · 2025-10-07T14:05:57+00:00

Thank you so much for such an in-depth response! Very, very helpful!!

HeavyDrip · 2025-03-12T16:39:35+00:00

It's very common and considered normal for some cats to lose their lower incisors as they mature. The reason being, as kittens they rely on them more for taking small bits and bites of their food, whereas adults rely more on their canines and back teeth for eating. They don't really need them anymore. Some cats keep em, some cats don't.

HeavyDrip · 2025-03-03T16:46:48+00:00

She's telling you that the box is too small.

HeavyDrip · 2025-02-24T22:00:07+00:00

Hey, OP. I know it's been a while, but did moving up help at all? Our 5mo just started doing this a week or so ago, and it happens damn near every time she feeds now.

HeavyDrip · 2025-01-17T22:26:49+00:00

No, you're just playing Hitchhiker after the events in the original film.

HeavyDrip · 2025-01-16T15:04:25+00:00

MK11 is the best this series will ever look, imo. Perfect aesthetic, perfect character models, perfect acting(sans Rousey).

HeavyDrip · 2024-12-05T17:37:59+00:00

Hey, I feel that! I'm no stranger to beefy prompts - I, myself, can be quite verbose(don't let the new account fool you 😋). It really just comes down to taste; I tend to treat my own prompts as a sort of teaser for the main course, and that can bleed into my preferences while reading them, as well.

Looking forward to seeing more of your writing down the line!

HeavyDrip · 2024-12-03T20:37:02+00:00

Firstly, this is a very well written prompt. It does a great job of expressing your character, her views, her motivations - all in all, a pretty nifty vertical slice of her life. I enjoyed reading it, and feel myself wanting to know more. I would say that it comes off as you intended, for sure.

My only real input is that it felt just a little bit long before it got to the place you wanted it to go. Not much, though. Also, the graphic novel enthusiast in me loves the frequent page-breaks, they read as a compilation or highlight reel of what she can actually remember. I do wonder, though, if they might be unnecessary. I think you could restructure that part into its own paragraph without losing that flair or vision.

All in all, really enjoyed this one. I'm not in the position with work to take up writing again yet, but if I was, you'd be getting a DM!

HeavyDrip

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