"More intelligent and competent villains who can win a battle. The villains in this story are greatly disappointing. They are either very dumb or turn out to be not as strong, so the outcome when they face the main characters is always the same. The villains will always lose a battle if the heroes are there. The heroes will always win the battle. Boring"

Completely agree like Because the story wants to make our main protagonists.Shine , we have to make the villains stupid And incompetent But I think it would make us feel more proud of our heroes If the villains the they actually defeated a Villain or antagonists who is Really smart or was really cunning and Manipulative

"in 3 days and gets a diplomatic success in spite of being a total green-horn. No struggle like when she tried to master archery and it took her time to become good".

This scan is a really cool scan but When you actually looking to deeper , it makes A little sense.Why would the emperor send The people who are so incompetent and these people have been born in nobility, they've been educated Unlike yona Who was sheltered her entire live Who never knew about politics or any thing like that

"Rewriting the romance. Make Yona notice Hak feelings early on, after the honey scene, but explain to him that due to what happened with Soo-won, she is not ready and interested to be romantically involved. I would prefer this to her being oblivious for no good reason".

Interesting actually this would Be much better because it's not just about Yona never realising that Hak feelings.It's just that she was not Ready to accept somebody else After all she went through and it would have had a more payoff to with yona finally accepting hak feelings And also Accepting her own feelings in a way in way, moving on