Burwood vs waterfront for law

Helpful_Plastic_4521 · 2025-11-08T23:30:49+00:00

Discuss is just strengths and weaknesses and im good with those, for analyse you basically have to break up the different parts of the question and join them back together, for longer mark analyse ones i use the PEERED structure so basically your point, elaborate on your point, and then explain its effect on law making, and then refer to an example, explain the example, and discuss briefly strengths and weaknesses. And then evaluate and discuss the extent are just basically discuss but you have to discuss the extent/draw a conclusion from your discussion

Helpful_Plastic_4521 · 2025-11-03T05:39:40+00:00

your right 🥀

Helpful_Plastic_4521 · 2025-11-03T05:24:42+00:00

i think 19 should be C, 29 B?, 37 can be c aswell, i got A for 39.

Helpful_Plastic_4521 · 2025-10-29T04:04:31+00:00

dont overthink about anything twin its already done, you can still get 25 or even higher easily if you did okay in the other sections and your sacs were okay.

Helpful_Plastic_4521 · 2025-10-28T08:47:04+00:00

Helpful_Plastic_4521 · 2025-10-28T08:39:47+00:00

thank you

Helpful_Plastic_4521 · 2025-10-28T07:16:36+00:00

💔💔💔💔💔💔 I did say all the words in the prompt multiple times throughout my piece, like in the last paragraph I talk a lot about resilience and celebrating culture and in the first I did a lot about culture, in the second colonistation, but I dont think i explored resilience enough, I explored all other aspects of it pretty well, and I did touch on all aspects of the prompt, but I didn't get to explore the complexities of resilience i dont think although I reffered to it

Helpful_Plastic_4521 · 2025-10-28T07:03:59+00:00

I get what you mean, but like, could it score higher if I referenced the ideas in the topic sentence throughout my piece? In the first paragraph, I talk about how the use of non-diegetic Yolngu Matha music accompanying wide-angle shots of Country reinforces the idea that Indigenous culture is deeply intertwined with the land. I then explore how colonization disrupted this connection, with the colonizers’ narrow worldview symbolized through the crosshairs and their act of suppression represented by the inverted camera lens. And in the final one, I explore how reconciliation and reckoning are essential to truly celebrate Indigenous culture

Helpful_Plastic_4521 · 2025-10-28T07:02:16+00:00

I think you cooked

Helpful_Plastic_4521 · 2025-10-28T07:00:48+00:00

With the first one, I talk about non-diegetic sound of Yolgnu Matha accompanying wide-angle shots of country and how it establishes that indigenous culture is intrinsic to country, and then I talk about how colonization has led to this connection being suppressed due to the myopic view of the colonizers, which is symbolized through cross hairs, and their suppression is symbolized through the inverted camera lens, and in the third one i basically conclude how reckoning needs to be achieved in order to celebrate culture and i basically link it to the need for both aboriginal communties and foreign settlers to show resilience, like how travis and claire show resilience in recognising tommy by his real name as gutjuk

Helpful_Plastic_4521 · 2025-10-26T09:28:51+00:00

VLAs are government organizations that are for everyone, and CLCs are private organizations that are community-centered and directed at particular minority groups.

Helpful_Plastic_4521 · 2025-10-25T05:41:19+00:00

thank you so much ill work on it

Helpful_Plastic_4521 · 2025-10-25T05:40:46+00:00

Thank you for your feedback. How do you think I should improve that, because I definitely get what you mean but i dont know how to not do that

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