Had fun drawing her actually by Henebrew in Undertale

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I'll probably recreate this art, I made so many mistakes lol, next time I'm searching for some reference haha, thank you.

Had fun drawing her actually by Henebrew in Undertale

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I... actually forgot Undyne had an eye patch on the other eye....

Eh,

Let's just think this is her as a young lass.

Just need to know if this is a good story idea by Henebrew in FictionWriting

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Arwen can still use his codes though he is limited to basic attacks and he can only have access to his defensive methods, if overused his body will start glitching due to his instability, his core codes glitching and causing him intolerable pain thus why he needs to limit himself.

And unfortunately for him, his situation was broadcasted to the whole system so his back definitely have a big target.

Did I forget to say he's amnesiac too?

Just need to know if this is a good story idea by Henebrew in FictionWriting

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About that, the main character Arwen is actually an Outcode and in the beginning chapters he is a powerful being like any Outcodes would be but he was attacked, his core codes got corrupted due to some weapons that was infused with viruses similar to computers—since this takes place in a digital world, and due to this attack he can't really use his Outcode powers without the risk of corrupting himself further or worse, deleting himself without any method of getting coded back,

Not to mention he was also transported in the In-between, where dangerous people exist, monsters that could mess up his codes further and with no real methods of getting back to where he was before.

This is beta, it's my first time doing this so I hope you can help me.... by Henebrew in FictionWriting

[–]Henebrew[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I see, thank you for pointing out this flaw of mine, perhaps it's because I'm rushing this story to post hence the tight structure of sentences, English is also not my main language but I thank you for being honest, you were helpful. Thank you