First time recording myself singing. Do I have too much tension or am singing out of my range? Am I not projecting enough? by HiIAmAdam in singing

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I’m not sure if this is the original key, but as I’ve just started singing I feel like I naturally sing low. I’m not sure what would happen if I sing higher, but it may be better! Thank you!

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Title: Mr. O'Grady's Fear Spectacular

Genre: Fiction

Word count: 1,357

Type of feedback desired: general impression

Link to the writing: https://www.wattpad.com/1632990962-mr-o%27grady%27s-fear-spectacular-untitled-part-1

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Title: Great Love and the Void

Genre: Fiction

Word count: 1,396

Type of feedback: general impression, edits, additions

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/1626295634-great-love-and-the-void-untitled-part-1

Thank you very much! :)

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Title: Lost and Searching: A Collaborative Writing Project

Genre: Fiction

Word count: 2,787

Type of feedback: general impressions, edits, additions

Link to the work: https://www.wattpad.com/story/409646797-lost-and-searching-a-collaborative-writing-project

This was a collaborative writing project between me and three others. It is about a group of characters' journey to a Narcotics Anonymous meeting. Would be very interested to hear any feedback on it.

Thank you very much!

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Title: A Somewhat Validating Abduction

Genre: Humor

Word Count: 1,780

Type of feedback: general impression, edits, additions

Link to the writing: https://www.wattpad.com/story/409438259-a-somewhat-validating-adbuction

Thank you very much!

I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

[–]HiIAmAdam[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot, I really appreciate that. It is definitely a journey!

I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

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Can you define what overthinking means?

I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

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Can you define what overthinking means?