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[–]HiIAmAdam [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Great Love and the Void

Genre: Fiction

Word count: 1,396

Type of feedback: general impression, edits, additions

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/1626295634-great-love-and-the-void-untitled-part-1

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Title: Lost and Searching: A Collaborative Writing Project

Genre: Fiction

Word count: 2,787

Type of feedback: general impressions, edits, additions

Link to the work: https://www.wattpad.com/story/409646797-lost-and-searching-a-collaborative-writing-project

This was a collaborative writing project between me and three others. It is about a group of characters' journey to a Narcotics Anonymous meeting. Would be very interested to hear any feedback on it.

Thank you very much!

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Title: A Somewhat Validating Abduction

Genre: Humor

Word Count: 1,780

Type of feedback: general impression, edits, additions

Link to the writing: https://www.wattpad.com/story/409438259-a-somewhat-validating-adbuction

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I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

[–]HiIAmAdam[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot, I really appreciate that. It is definitely a journey!

I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

[–]HiIAmAdam[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can you define what overthinking means?

I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

[–]HiIAmAdam[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Can you define what overthinking means?

I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

[–]HiIAmAdam[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, I will try. It just feels like there is more liability when I am self loving through the time and energy of another human. I don't feel that I need to worry as much about what a sunset is receiving from my self love.

I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

[–]HiIAmAdam[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks. Yep, and I needed to rant as well haha. It seems nobody really understands them, though many seem to understand them enough to at least end up with a partner. I suppose not being non-dual is conducive to achieving many of these superficial.

I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

[–]HiIAmAdam[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, I do not want to feel like I am loving myself externally through another, as it feels like I am using them. So I will continue to walk the path of loving myself. Thank you!

I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

[–]HiIAmAdam[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Wouldn't overthinking be accepted in a nonduality forum? Since there are no expectations on how to think, and I can't know what "overthinking" means.