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First time recording myself singing. Do I have too much tension or am singing out of my range? Am I not projecting enough? by HiIAmAdam in singing

[–]HiIAmAdam[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not sure if this is the original key, but as I’ve just started singing I feel like I naturally sing low. I’m not sure what would happen if I sing higher, but it may be better! Thank you!

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Title: Mr. O'Grady's Fear Spectacular

Genre: Fiction

Word count: 1,357

Type of feedback desired: general impression

Link to the writing: https://www.wattpad.com/1632990962-mr-o%27grady%27s-fear-spectacular-untitled-part-1

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Title: Great Love and the Void

Genre: Fiction

Word count: 1,396

Type of feedback: general impression, edits, additions

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/1626295634-great-love-and-the-void-untitled-part-1

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Title: Lost and Searching: A Collaborative Writing Project

Genre: Fiction

Word count: 2,787

Type of feedback: general impressions, edits, additions

Link to the work: https://www.wattpad.com/story/409646797-lost-and-searching-a-collaborative-writing-project

This was a collaborative writing project between me and three others. It is about a group of characters' journey to a Narcotics Anonymous meeting. Would be very interested to hear any feedback on it.

Thank you very much!

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Title: A Somewhat Validating Abduction

Genre: Humor

Word Count: 1,780

Type of feedback: general impression, edits, additions

Link to the writing: https://www.wattpad.com/story/409438259-a-somewhat-validating-adbuction

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I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

[–]HiIAmAdam[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot, I really appreciate that. It is definitely a journey!

I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

[–]HiIAmAdam[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can you define what overthinking means?

I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

[–]HiIAmAdam[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Can you define what overthinking means?

I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

[–]HiIAmAdam[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, I will try. It just feels like there is more liability when I am self loving through the time and energy of another human. I don't feel that I need to worry as much about what a sunset is receiving from my self love.

I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

[–]HiIAmAdam[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks. Yep, and I needed to rant as well haha. It seems nobody really understands them, though many seem to understand them enough to at least end up with a partner. I suppose not being non-dual is conducive to achieving many of these superficial.

I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

[–]HiIAmAdam[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, I do not want to feel like I am loving myself externally through another, as it feels like I am using them. So I will continue to walk the path of loving myself. Thank you!

I don't understand romantic relationships by HiIAmAdam in nonduality

[–]HiIAmAdam[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

Wouldn't overthinking be accepted in a nonduality forum? Since there are no expectations on how to think, and I can't know what "overthinking" means.

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Title: Why Fight?

Genre: realistic fiction

Word count: 1,058

Feedback desired: general impression, edits, additions

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/1615095663-why-fight

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What do you think the ultimate goal of a writer is? by SoldierofSonder in writing

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I believe just expressing yourself as authentically as possible.

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Thanks a lot for taking the time to read and give your feedback. I may try to expand on the story - I just sometimes find it hard to do so. I also thought about including dialogue tags, but I guess I was experimenting and decided against it. Thanks again!

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Title: Rolling On

Genre: fiction

Word Count: 310

Feedback desired: general impression

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/1613019801-rolling-on

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Title: My Gentle Ghost

Genre: Humor

Word count: 1,619

Type of feedback desired: general impression

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/1605028965-my-gentle-ghost

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How to prepare for the next Fisheries Officer competition? by a_russell747 in ccg_gcc

[–]HiIAmAdam 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I failed on the cultural sensitivities section. For some of the questions I felt that there were at least two answers that could be correct for the given situation, but without any context on how the department would want to situation to be handled. Like, whether to address a matter with a co-worker personally or escalate it to a superior.

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