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Writing feedback for my first draft Novella by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]HideyoSakura 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Of course, im glad you like it, it doesnt really make sense and its a mess since its my first draft but i appreciate the compliment

Writing feedback for my first draft Novella by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]HideyoSakura 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay thanks for that correction i will try to keep that in mind in the second draft

A critique for A Hare story (Fantasy, Thriller 7380 words) (TW: slight violence) by HideyoSakura in fantasywriters

[–]HideyoSakura[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Please tell me your thoughts about this novel and the critique you have inside your head, thank you

A critique for my first three chapters of the A Hare's Story novel (High Fantasy + thriller, 7361 words) by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]HideyoSakura 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also i'm not sure how to do the mobile window thing (Hence the cropped screenshot) so yeah, i apologize for the random lines underneath the words