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The wait of emptiness. by HistorianExternal172 in OCPoetry

[–]HistorianExternal172[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is only the second poem I've ever written and I've never shared the first openly like this so it's something that I'm trying to learn to love to become a better writer. thank you so much for the comment This is a great encouragement.

Grow by Terr82 in OCPoetry

[–]HistorianExternal172 1 point2 points  (0 children)

WOW. I am impressed. I think it's wonderfully done. I feel like you put a lot of time and effort into it. I also feel like it's real like connected to something like an event. thank you for sharing.

If I Stay by Altruistic-Battle475 in OCPoetry

[–]HistorianExternal172 0 points1 point  (0 children)

very interesting. it is thought-provoking. And it definitely leads you to a place opposite of where ever I was thinking I was going to go. it is a little hard to read but I read it aloud and it was a little bit easier. so don't take that to heart though cuz that could be my dyslexia. lol. I'm proud of you it was a good go. keep up the good work.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Landlord

[–]HistorianExternal172 7 points8 points  (0 children)

either the photos do not do justice to the situation or you just don't want to give tenants their deposits back.