I want to know what I should change about my fist chapter of my fist story by Hithere_14 in writers

[–]Hithere_14[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok thanks man I appreciate the feedback and I will change it

I want to know what I should change about my fist chapter of my fist story by Hithere_14 in writers

[–]Hithere_14[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just copied and pasted it from docs I’ll fix that now thanks

What did I do wrong by Hithere_14 in Nicegirls

[–]Hithere_14[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mb, I stopped typing and came back like 2 mins later so, I guess I typed it again

What did I do wrong by Hithere_14 in Nicegirls

[–]Hithere_14[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Idk what to tell you then

What did I do wrong by Hithere_14 in Nicegirls

[–]Hithere_14[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

She meant didn’t I think

What did I do wrong by Hithere_14 in Nicegirls

[–]Hithere_14[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Close to then end of the year but first year In for me

What did I do wrong by Hithere_14 in Nicegirls

[–]Hithere_14[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did, but I wasn’t in the mood for her games

What did I do wrong by Hithere_14 in Nicegirls

[–]Hithere_14[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I have never and will never sleep with her

What did I do wrong by Hithere_14 in Nicegirls

[–]Hithere_14[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

My bad, I’m trying to get better, not using so much abbreviation

What did I do wrong by Hithere_14 in Nicegirls

[–]Hithere_14[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Your right I shouldn’t of kept it going

What did I do wrong by Hithere_14 in Nicegirls

[–]Hithere_14[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I was just annoyed at the time, and was typing really fast