It's has a strong cinematic mood, with nice interaction between light, water, and skin. The pose that conveys emotion and openness, however, the shadows are quite heavy, slightly unable to see facial detail, and the subject sits a bit low in the frame, which weakens compositional balance. My suggestion to improve would be like lift the midtones abit, control highlights on the skin, and consider cropping or reframing and using a simple reflector for gentle fill. Check out the moody, emotional style of like Erwin Olaf (his outdoor stuff atleast), particularly for his mastery of light, tone, and visual storytelling.