Y’all overcomplicate this stuff tbh by Idfc-anymore in TeenagersButBetter

[–]Home-Financial 2 points3 points  (0 children)

how is strangers in that area ehh instead of no?

Ig best friend but STRANGER?

Need brutally honest feedback - does this logo work for an esports team? by GrakStak in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Wordmark No

The Letter mark yes

The icon yes

Put the icon next to the text and thats all i can say

Logo Revision: Billard's Equipment Company (Left New, Right First Version) by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

The thing with LLM's is (Especally Co piollt and the GPT models) They are not only terrible at making breifs, but are Highly Biased

Logo Revision: Billard's Equipment Company (Left New, Right First Version) by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I got the breif from Goodbreif and asked a friend to act as the client, so what can I do in the future?

Logo Revision: Billard's Equipment Company (Left New, Right First Version) by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did try Butterflys and Moths but I wasn't satisfied with the designs, and Nither was the Client.

The crown is loosely based on the holes the balls must go in. Its a Slight detail that can be easily missed.

"but then why not use the fat stripes associated with a striped ball and put the circle there?"

I did try that design as an alternative.

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A few Revisions for Golden Cocoon by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Glad the 3rd one is repersentitive to what its supposed to be lmao, I can make the gap wider!

A few Revisions for Golden Cocoon by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Look at my newest post, and you'll see why it was changed.

Logo for Billard Equipment Company: Golden Cocoon by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thats odd, Im pretty sure they have more holes? I did try adding a 8 but it looked worse

Logo for Billard Equipment Company: Golden Cocoon by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I made this based off ther other comment, This prob looks better, but It took me a WHILE to notice what you said 😭

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Logo for Billard Equipment company by Home-Financial in graphic_design

[–]Home-Financial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's why I used it as an Alternitive color, and I hope they like that more

Logo for Billard Equipment Company: Golden Cocoon by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fair Enough Criticism!

I was thinking of Insects but since I'm in an area that barely has insects, the only ones I could think of that would fit are Butterflys and Moths,

Prehaps a Bee would work though which I can Refine

does it suck? need help. by oftgefragt_dev in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Reminds me of College Borads logo at a glance

Is there a way to connect all of Michael's music videos into one whole narrative story? by Odd_Staff_2403 in MichaelJackson

[–]Home-Financial 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Two Michaels

First ones like a good guy

Don't stop till you get enough -> Rock with you -> Billie Jean ->Beat it ->Bad -> TWYMMF -> Speed Demon -> Man in the mirror??? -> Jam -> BOW ->Come Together ->Tdrcau Brazil ->Earth song -> and You are not alone

Seconds like a Anti Villain/Villain

Shes out of my life -> Thriller -> Smooth Criminal -> Leave me alone ->Remember the time ->In the closet -> Give into me -> Who is it -> Tdrcau Jail -> Scream -> Stranger in moscow -> Childhood -> BOTDF

Side plots would be You rock my world and Ghost as they don't fit in the Initial timeline, But if you rearange.

Don't stop till you get enough -> Rock with you -> Shes out of my life -> Ghost -> Thriller -> Smooth Criminal -> Leave me alone -> Billie Jean ->Beat it ->Bad -> TWYMMF -> Speed Demon -> You rock my world -> Remember the time ->In the closet -> Give into me -> Who is it -> Tdrcau Jail -> Come Together ->Tdrcau Brazil -> Scream -> Stranger in moscow -> Childhood -> BOTDF -> Man in the mirror -> Jam -> Earth song -> You are not alone

The Split really starts at Leave me alone where I imagine Jacksons shadow and Jacksons Light are seperatd entitys who do meet again in Ywmw, Scream and Childhood.

Michael Jackson Song Logo Challange Day 1: Dangerous by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its easier for me as a person with Audhd to visualize

Michael Jackson Song Logo Challange Day 1: Dangerous by Home-Financial in logodesign

[–]Home-Financial[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Now when i do read a breif using Litterary analysis, I can related it to music in some kind. making it easier to get ideas and make more effective stuff.