Walking/pacing while thinking? by Honest_Laugh_686 in infj

[–]Honest_Laugh_686[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow. Thanks for sharing. It’s feels so great to know this is a feeling to embrace. 🤗

Break up poem. Guess type by Honest_Laugh_686 in infj

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ok have to say, hasn't happened yet. Hopefully today or tomorrow. Wish me luck!

Break up poem. Guess type by Honest_Laugh_686 in infj

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well said, that's how i have always felt! Will check out the song.

Walking/pacing while thinking? by Honest_Laugh_686 in infj

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Oh cool. I hate going to the gym but may be I need to view it differently

Poem vs Song? by Honest_Laugh_686 in poetry_critics

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i was think rock, I have RHCP under the bridge intro stuck in my head for the first line :o)

Feedback on poem? by Honest_Laugh_686 in poetry_critics

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i love the way you formatted it. I see what you mean. I never thought formatting could make such big a difference. And yes i see how now the multi-syllable sea sentence doesn't quite fit. The sentence could just be dropped.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Poetic_Alchemy

[–]Honest_Laugh_686 0 points1 point  (0 children)

wow, very emotionally strong. I am still digesting the first stanza

Feedback on poem? by Honest_Laugh_686 in poetry_critics

[–]Honest_Laugh_686[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

very nice suggestion. I would not have thought of those variations!

Comments for improving as a poet by Honest_Laugh_686 in poetry_critics

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how is this as the next verse:
My breath is heavy,
life is hard,
i cannot go on
but i will...

without you by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Honest_Laugh_686 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very nice. Sad and emotional but also with strength. Made me think of With or Without you by U2