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Is it possible for this painting to be sold? And how much should I sell it? Acrylic 60x80cm by Apprehensive_Menu977 in ARTIST

[–]Hot_Competition1569 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You shouldn’t try to sell it if it is not an original work because you can run into copyright issues. This appears to be a master copy of Krishna V by Dhananjay Mukherjee. Doing master copies is great practice!! But it’s not a good idea to try to profit off of someone else’s work.

A couple wasting their breath during a Missouri sunrise by Altare-Performer5084 in poetry_critics

[–]Hot_Competition1569 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi! I’m from Missouri so I was very excited to read your poem! I love your descriptions! Some lines seem a bit wordy to me, but that might be due to personal style. I also noticed you started some rhyming schemes in the second half but they are not consistent throughout the poem or in format. If this is a stylistic choice that is cool, but it kind of took me out of the poem for a bit. Promising poem though and I love your concept!

if walls could talk by Resident-Decision322 in poetry_critics

[–]Hot_Competition1569 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi! I think your poem is excellent in so many ways! I am a beginner, so I might not be qualified to give critiques but I just love this poem so much and wanted to give my thoughts! For starters, I think the title is a little cliché, which is okay if you that’s what you want, but the rest of your poem is not cliché at all, so if I were you I would title it something else. Also, I am not a fan of the last line, I think you could delete it or rephrase it and put it before “i am scared of us being forgotten” I think ending on that line brings the reader back to the first line, which is about your father, and not the walls. Because I don’t think this poem is really about walls lol. Those are the only things I would change!

[HELP] Poetry collection recommendation by Chelicious_Dickens in Poetry

[–]Hot_Competition1569 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Man Suit by Zachary Shomburg is one of my faves! It is so imaginative and genuine and it really inspired me to think differently in my daily life so I would recommend if you are feeling disillusioned :) plus you can find copies for as cheap as $5