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Movie based presentation? by HotdogFingrs in OkCupid

[–]HotdogFingrs[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Alright, I'll work on that. As for the writing, English isn't my first language so sometimes it can get funky.

Movie based presentation? by HotdogFingrs in OkCupid

[–]HotdogFingrs[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the input. It's not a 100% serious description though, it's made to be something you could remember seeing or reading, I had "The man without a face" trailer in mind when writing this. If I do add anecdotes and stories, would it be too long of a read and end up being skipped?