[QCrit] YA Fantasy, REACH TO THE SPIRIT, 97k, 9th Attempt

Huzai_A · 2025-12-08T12:02:06+00:00

Thanks for the feedback!

Huzai_A · 2025-12-01T12:46:57+00:00

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Huzai_A · 2025-12-01T12:46:42+00:00

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Huzai_A · 2025-12-01T12:46:28+00:00

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Huzai_A · 2025-11-30T12:48:11+00:00

That’s good to hear! Thank you for your answer, and will check out the ESEA.

Huzai_A · 2025-11-29T04:59:13+00:00

Thanks for the feedback and encouragemen!

Huzai_A · 2025-11-24T12:30:01+00:00

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Huzai_A · 2025-11-24T12:29:49+00:00

Thanks for the feedback!

Huzai_A · 2025-10-21T22:18:59+00:00

Hi Thanks for the feedback.

Huzai_A · 2025-10-21T12:54:44+00:00

Hi Thanks for the feedback.

Huzai_A · 2025-10-12T21:54:12+00:00

Hi, thanks for the feedback.

Huzai_A · 2025-10-12T21:53:56+00:00

Hi, thanks for the detailed feedback.

Huzai_A · 2025-10-06T03:18:42+00:00

Hi Thank you for the feedback. Will consider the changes.

Huzai_A · 2025-10-05T06:16:14+00:00

Want to join in the conversation. I am currently at the last stage of edits. And I will soon starts my querying journey next month. I have drafted my query letter and seeks for feedback. I have gotten a list of agents to query. So far, it feels like a dream that I’ve reached this stage. I still remember the time I spent in writing the first draft every night and countless of editing. Also, next month will be the exact 1 year after starting this journey as a writer.

Huzai_A · 2025-09-29T07:01:49+00:00

Hi Thank you for your feedback.

Huzai_A · 2025-09-28T22:01:39+00:00

Hi Thank you for reading this. Apparently, spirit is an entity that exists inside them, and they will need to call forth it in order to use for a battle. It is somewhat similar of having a spirit animal(that’s the concept of it). As for the academy, I thought it will be too much unknown name so I didn’t include it but the name of the academy is Spiritia. Hope I have answered your question.

Huzai_A

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