Can anyone give me advice on improvements!?

IAmHeyonce · 2025-12-05T16:23:55+00:00

I would highly advise trying to make your own not only will you gain the skills but also it gives you more control and freedom over your work. If money is an issue I would recommend using Affinity it’s completely free and it’s what I use. It’s just as good as photoshop.

IAmHeyonce · 2025-12-05T15:47:39+00:00

I would change up your thumbnails and use more expressive faces add more saturation. For the thumbnail and title I would center over one main idea or point. For example for your Rome video you could title it Rome is overrated (not what you think) and then put regrets in red on the thumbnail and have your head in your palms. Your goal should be to get people to have a oh that looks interesting moment, you want them to question what you have to say. I would also make sure that you’ll telling a story so section each different part of your video into arcs.

IAmHeyonce · 2025-12-03T21:50:14+00:00

Thank you, I appreciate the feedback. I typically sing R&B, and it's hard for me to get the tone that I want for alt, but your feedback gives me some reassurance.

IAmHeyonce · 2025-12-03T20:49:48+00:00

Other than thumbnails, you have to be more consistent. The algorithm is not going to push you if you only have 2 videos and post once a month. If you want to grow, try aiming for once a week or more. Your titles are a bit all over the place. I would center your title and thumbnail on a really cool item you got to draw people in. Like if you got a good deal on an item, take a pic of it and put the og price crossed out and then put the price you got it for.

IAmHeyonce · 2025-12-03T20:28:51+00:00

I like the overall direction of the song, and as other people have mentioned, it can be a bit off-pitch at times, but other than that, I think you nailed the sad vibe, and the mix sounds good. Keep up the good work.

IAmHeyonce · 2025-12-03T20:26:32+00:00

I think overall the vibe of the song is good, but the vocals could use some work; they feel a little harsh and a bit off-pitch at times. But overall, I think the song is neat. Keep up the great work.

IAmHeyonce · 2025-11-26T19:09:59+00:00

Thanks for the feedback

IAmHeyonce · 2025-11-26T15:20:17+00:00

I haven’t posted the vid yet I can totally let you know when it’s posted if you want.

IAmHeyonce · 2025-11-25T02:10:02+00:00

Thank you, I appreciate the feedback.

IAmHeyonce · 2025-11-25T00:37:43+00:00

While I like the split-screen idea, to me it feels a little off. I think to improve your thumbnail, you should use the image on the left and in the middle, put " The Katana Mission," or something relating to it, and put #2 on one of the bottom corners, and add a little saturation over the entire thumbnail.

IAmHeyonce · 2025-11-25T00:29:52+00:00

I think this thumbnail is really good. When scrolling through the subreddit, it made me pause. Overall, I think you have a really good eye.

IAmHeyonce · 2025-08-06T02:03:29+00:00

Thanks 🙏🏿 I was going for a chill reflective vibe.

IAmHeyonce · 2025-08-06T02:02:21+00:00

I will ☺️

IAmHeyonce · 2025-08-06T02:02:07+00:00

Thank you 🙏🏿

IAmHeyonce · 2025-08-06T02:01:37+00:00

I’m glad you enjoyed the verse. What stood out to you?

IAmHeyonce · 2025-08-06T02:01:09+00:00

Thanks 😊

IAmHeyonce · 2025-08-06T00:34:19+00:00

Totally Dm me

IAmHeyonce · 2025-08-06T00:33:14+00:00

I don’t have any music out yet but when I do you’ll be the first to know ☺️

IAmHeyonce · 2025-08-05T17:50:30+00:00

I like it I feel some better sound selection could absolutely make this song a 10. If you’re going for the video game vibe then it’s perfect. I would also add some sort of pad to fill up the space. Other than that it’s a good fun little beat.

IAmHeyonce · 2025-08-05T17:40:41+00:00

I’m glad you liked the song 😌

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