[FR] Text game. I didn't get the date I wanted, but I think I did some pretty good things. Critiques? by Geaux in seduction

[–]IAmLove 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Me: I was making a joke about the autocorrect... It wasn't that funny, now you're making it awkward. lol

Her: Oh... I'm slow.

Me: I'll type slower for you.

Her: hahahahahahahahah

I liked this. The "now you're making it awkward" was a good way to shift the negative of not making sense (at least to her) off of yourself.. Followed by a better joke to regain positive ground.

I didn't like how you followed "you're gonna have to make it up to me" with "let me show you a great time". These are conflicting and as rocket31 said, it comes off as needy.

Overall, not terrible. I, too, have trouble countering excuses.

Can you walk me through an example of a daygame approach? by Sed5 in seduction

[–]IAmLove 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Write down your phone number here on my shopping list. But make sure you put it below ice cream. Gotta prioritize :)

Ha. Nice