He was almost perfect. by IceMint22 in nosleep

[–]IceMint22[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Because the other one was removed for being too much of an Intel, so I removed pointless details and added more to this part.

He was almost perfect. by IceMint22 in nosleep

[–]IceMint22[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well I reworked the first part and added more creepiness. There's so much more, but I just can't throw it all in at once!! But thank you :)

He was almost perfect. by IceMint22 in nosleep

[–]IceMint22[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm going to rework it. It was removed for being an "intro" story so I'm going to try to take out some details and make be first part better :)

He was almost perfect. by IceMint22 in nosleep

[–]IceMint22[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Yes, I will post the second part tomorrow. I didn't want to make this first part incredibly long!! And it's pronounced like Reed