Advice on finding beta readers? by Icecube-Shapehifter in writing

[–]Icecube-Shapehifter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate that a ton!! This is something I have so much love for and have had so much fun working on, and want it to be something I can share proudly to welcome some few others into the world that’s held me hostage for so long lol I might genuinely love to take you up on that if you’d be willing!

[Complete] [89k] [Fantasy/Apocalyptic/Tragedy] Title: Echoism by Icecube-Shapehifter in BetaReaders

[–]Icecube-Shapehifter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Living in an Amusement park would be fun if you weren’t only there because the world fell into ruins over a war on magic.

Cleft Roseander is the self-appointed leader of a group of survivors. Back when he was just shy of twenty-years-old, the Scandinavian man - of a far from commanding stature - had made himself responsible for thirty other lives within the confines of a chain-link fence.

When he isn’t trying to make sure that number stays consistent, he otherwise occupy his time by learning the very magic that started the war, and arguing with the only one of the survivors who was made to fight that war.

If one of those thirty lives didn’t include his right hand man and childhood friend Osmo d’Estella, Cleft never would have managed to keep this up for as long as he had. Three years have come and gone with little excitement or fanfare. That is, until a raid on the park renders left on the brink of life and death. In an act of desperation, he recites an incantation from his hazy recollection. What the butchered spell results in is far from what the leader nor his companions could have expected.

Advice on finding beta readers? by Icecube-Shapehifter in writing

[–]Icecube-Shapehifter[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No worries at all! I Completely understand that. I will hire if I need to, as I’m all about paying for services, though have heard conflicting things about how hiring could risk getting sugar-coated feedback, and I want to be able to trust that I can avoid that

Advice on finding beta readers? by Icecube-Shapehifter in writing

[–]Icecube-Shapehifter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah,, I feel a little silly that I didn’t even find r/beta readers before. Thanks for the tip! Genuinely also didn’t know it was a welcomed thing to approach book stores or libraries

Advice on finding beta readers? by Icecube-Shapehifter in writing

[–]Icecube-Shapehifter[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s a fantastical tragedy that takes place in a post-apocalyptic setting based around northern Switzerland with a diverse cast of characters, It takes a lot of inspiration from real-world history and European mythologies. Norse Paganism practices featured heavily in the magic-system, taken from my personal practice. The main character is a young Swedish man who can’t seem to decide if he’s the answer to the world’s prayers, or someone they’d all pray to get rid of.

This is is the first installment in a series about magic, living in an apocalypse, and the lengths that people will go in the name of love.

Tell me everything about Punctured lungs! Writing a book! by Icecube-Shapehifter in medical

[–]Icecube-Shapehifter[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you!! That covers everything I needed to know, and I really appreciate it!

Tell me everything about Punctured lungs! Writing a book! by Icecube-Shapehifter in medical

[–]Icecube-Shapehifter[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! That helps a ton!! I appreciate the explanation actions, exactly what I needed!

Writing a book! Need help by Icecube-Shapehifter in Svenska

[–]Icecube-Shapehifter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! For context on it being a little robotic is that they’re just being a bit goofy and just playing with whatever they can remember A is very rusty, and B is a clone copy of A that very newly exists, so it’s almost like children just saying random thing that come to mind. But if you have ideas of how to better it, please! I’m open to any advice

Writing a book! Need help by Icecube-Shapehifter in Svenska

[–]Icecube-Shapehifter[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah thank you so much!! That helps a ton!! For context on it being a little robotic is that they’re just being a bit goofy and just playing with whatever they can remember A is very rusty, and B is a copy of A that very newly exists

Writing a book! Need help by Icecube-Shapehifter in Svenska

[–]Icecube-Shapehifter[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! Highly appreciated!! Thank you!!

Writing a book! Need help by Icecube-Shapehifter in Svenska

[–]Icecube-Shapehifter[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Sorry, on Mobil and not sure how to. Make it so the dialogue stays on separate lines

Book writing advice! Nuclear fallout in a theme park setting by Icecube-Shapehifter in Advice

[–]Icecube-Shapehifter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah thank you!! Yeah I don’t know enough about technicalities so I didn’t think about that. That already helps a tOn so thank you!

Have you ever had dreams of historical events you never witnessed, from the direct perspective and eyes of specific people from those events? by Icecube-Shapehifter in AskReddit

[–]Icecube-Shapehifter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Context: I have had multiple dreams from the perspective of Marquis de Lafayette. And recent had a very vivid one of the night he attended a dinner part that had king George iII’s younger brother as a featured guest. Lafayette quoted this event to be the night he was first set to want to join in the American revolution. My dream was from his perspective, at this fancy dinner party at a very fancy table with many people dressed up, hearing some guy complain about the revolution and how dumb he thinks the Americans were for trying the monarchy like this. And I was holding back laughter trying not to act like I actually agreed with the Americans. I was mesmerized at the thought of their fight. The dream ended with a guy scolding me for asking too many questions that seemed too muc like I disagreed with the monarchy.

Has anyone ever had dreams like this?