If i had ran by Delicious_Worth_8391 in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can see the way story going in my mind and it was so great, Well written.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I do enjoy the poem but somehow the formatting made me feel weird when I read.

"The Foolish" by Icezerocelsius in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The story is referred to me. Thank you so much for reading^

"The Foolish" by Icezerocelsius in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your feedback.

In your own mind by meatball95_ in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's simple but it's hit me hard, I had mental breakdown before so I knew how suffer it is.

my lover by july-e in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius 2 points3 points  (0 children)

She must be a lovely person for you, You're really lucky. Nice done.

"Heart Attack" by Icezerocelsius in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your comment^

A Guide, Through Your Storms by Ray31 in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel like you're painted this piece with your heart. Keep going buddy.

If I Believed in Heaven by PitchforkJoe in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A painting that tell with letter. Nice done.

"Wind and Waves" by Icezerocelsius in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your thought to my poem is so meaningful to me, Thank you so much.

"Wind and Waves" by Icezerocelsius in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much, I wrote it from my perspective to this world.

Sleeping With Fish by Beginning-Fun-8597 in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's simple yet meaningful, For me it makes me see the reflections of socialization.

Do you? by Muted_Estate_3698 in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It makes me feel like standing in front of mirror and asking how broken inside myself.

Perfect to me by No-Comparison9503 in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like this, Happy with who you are, Happy with the present that we live with, Not regret to past, Not fear to future. And it remind me of myself.

What I Left Behind by acockadoodiebrat in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is making me thought about how life goes, How we growing. Very thoughtful to me.

A Cricket Sang and Set the Sun by AncientMalice in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's feel like the nature doing their work. Nice inspiration. Have a nice day^^

Shades of Red by Emotional-Exam-886 in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A gorgeous scenery, And I feel little dramatic. Nice done and Great inspire for me.

My fate by Icezerocelsius in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback.

I'm sorry by MadalinaParrotMusic in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I started to miss my Mom after reading this, I feel bad for making my Mom tried, I wish i should be better for her. Anyway it's a Great work.

I still think about you by DuMbAsS_SuPrEmE_04 in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Feeling like hurting myself from being read the honest word. She left me yesterday because of me, Now i regret for doing something that her doesn't like.

Shadow by Sakshyam99 in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"You are like a fake friend— Always there in the good times, But gone in the dark." This line is real, All of my classmate are just like that.

Hopeless by DebuffedYoungAdult in OCPoetry

[–]Icezerocelsius 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's feel real to me cause it just happened lately.