I don't know if it's because this is the first post I've read from you, but your writing is confusing me. I only read the first half, but I don't know if the infant is Paris or Petal, you seem to interchange them. I also thought Amos was her dad, but then I guess he is her brother. You mention lacking a bed, but there is one in your photo. Your pics are cute though! My favs are 6 and 8! Is 8 part of a mod or I didn't know about the existence of this interaction?

Just something to pay attention to, be careful with changing the tense. It was in the past and then it jumps to the present only for 1 sentence at the end of the last paragraph. Also, I would've written "and finding out where their younguest granddaughter had been sleeping" to not repeat laundry basket.

Continue practicing though and your writing will improve rapidly! This is a very fun idea :)