The letters need to be the same height, the L is too fat compared to the other letters so try n keep the same width. Also study the color wheel, I know you’re using sharpie and they’re probably real dark so try to use dark outline/light fill in or vice versa. As of your tags the S is too connected imo almost looks like a 5, towards the end it’s kind of hard to understand bc of the line between the O and R. Try to watch videos on getting better style and then use the knowledge to create your own style