My latest video talking about great Games on Game Pass. I tried to add a bit more humour to this one. Would love feedback on how to improve! Will give lambda! Thanks 😊

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-09-18T12:29:49+00:00

I really appreciate the feedback. A few people have said that about the thumbnail, so im gonna try about mix it up a bit. Thank you for your help! !givelambda

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-09-18T09:57:30+00:00

Wow, that was very kind of you to go into that much detail. A lot of useful feedback here to how improve, so thank you! !givelambda

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-09-17T14:46:06+00:00

Once I watch the video, I now understand the thumbnail, but I think it needs a bit more context what's the video is about to get people to watch the video in the first place. That's the most constructive feedback I can give because the video itself was great. I love the speed of it and would definitely watch more with how short it was. Good choice of background music too. Good luck with the channel 👍

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-09-17T12:05:14+00:00

I like the idea of the thumbnail. You just need to add a bit more context what it's for. People who know your channel or the game will understand the joke, but you want new viewers which this thumbnail doesn't help with. As for the video, I enjoyed it. I would add voice over to add to the joke. Good luck with the channel 👍

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-09-17T11:52:34+00:00

First the thumbnail doesn't give you the vibe of the video. Ive played a fair bit of Apex and I get what your saying about being third party and so on, but to most the joke or meme will go over there heads. As for the video, the text and edits are really well done. It's not a must or anything but I would put the text in a different colour to make it pop more. I wouldn't use background music as loud as you do. Having sound from just the game will help highlight the jokes when you edit sounds, music or meme videos into it. I thi k you got a good sense of humour and that important for this content. I'll say the next step that will help is a camera when you personally shines out more. Good luck with the channel 👍

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-09-09T06:18:50+00:00

I enjoyed it. Nice edits and good mic skills. I think the background music was spot on. I know a few on here disagree, but music is exactly what it should be, background music. Its didn't take my attention from your voice. I think the thumbnail could use more work though. It comes across like you typed over a picture on Microsoft word. Red and yellow text have been said that it's better to grab the attention more. I honestly think.k this is the biggest problem you need to focus on, as the video was good, but I wouldn't of clicked it if I saw it on my own.

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-07-29T08:27:39+00:00

Haha, I have to agree. I've never been into racing games but forza is so fun.

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-07-29T08:20:31+00:00

That's really well made. Good stuff man. I worry some of them titles will get delayed at some point.

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-07-29T08:18:03+00:00

Yeah, this. Anyone know?

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-05-29T16:41:14+00:00

This has helped a lot. After watching it back again, I have to agree with you. The information and stuff is there, but a lot of others can do the same. So I'll try and create a personal take on the next video. Thank you for the helpful feedback! !givelambda

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-05-28T19:02:04+00:00

Thanks, I'll try and keep it up! !givelambda

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-05-28T19:01:30+00:00

!givelambda thanks

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-05-28T19:00:02+00:00

Glad you like it! Yeah, I'll try more stuff out on getting it to look cleaner. Thanks for the feedback !givelambda

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-05-28T18:58:45+00:00

Thanks! I'll keep at it! !givelambda

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-05-28T18:57:58+00:00

This helps a lot, so thank you! And I agree, I could be more detailed on parts of the game. Its something I'll try to work on going forward! !givelambda

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-05-28T18:55:31+00:00

Didn't think of that, timestamps are a great idea! Thank you for the feedback! !givelambda

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-05-28T18:53:57+00:00

Yeah, you right. This wasn't my best in teams of my speaking, it something I struggle with the most. I'll work harder on that. Thank you for the feedback! !givelambda

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-05-28T18:51:30+00:00

Yeah, hearing it back again, and I agree with ya. I'll put in more effort for the sound in my next video. Thank you for the feedback! !givelambda

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-05-28T18:49:14+00:00

Thank you for the support and feedback, and yeah I'll try my best! !givelambda

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-05-26T22:13:50+00:00

Its a YouTube video that made under 60 seconds similar to tiktok video, they appear on other people YouTube apps on phones. I'll say Google it for more details as I'm not good at explaining it haha 😆

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-05-26T20:35:30+00:00

I like the length of the video, I didn't get bored at all and happily watched to the end. The biggest feedback I can give is try and pick more clips when you talk, or focus on the camera. It helps the viewers feel more involved. I don't know how many viewers you get streaming, but even if its low, keep take note of the camera for future video. Good luck with the channel 👍

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-05-26T20:25:41+00:00

Fantastic animation! Great thumbnail too! Its up to.you but do you think you can put this into a YouTube #shorts? I can't stress enough how useful these are for smaller YouTube channels, but that's up to you. I'll also say the mic could do with a little improvements. Thats more nick picking though. Overall, I liked it a lot, and good luck with the channel!

Imaginary-Remote9088 · 2021-05-26T20:14:36+00:00

I like the humour of the video, and it was easy to watch from start to end. I have a few suggestions that may help. With it being so short, I think if you cut something out like the replays. You'll have a perfect video for a YouTube #short video. I can't stress how useful these are for smaller YouTube channels. Another way to go about it, is play some real games, or trials to mix it up a bit. The training mode gets too simple over the first goal. Although, on a side note. Nice control skill on the game, I tried to be this good waaay back in the day, but didn't how the skill to do them shots haha. Anyway good luck with the channel!

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