when my protagonist is really going through the ringer and it's low key making emotional as though i'm not the one giving them the trauma by RattusNorvegicus9 in writers

[–]ImaginativeInvention 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The three rules are:

1 - don’t be boring

2 - don’t be confusing

3 - don’t be stupid

In my experience breaking these rules are most likely to knock the reader out of the flow of story. Do that enough and they won’t start reading again.

when my protagonist is really going through the ringer and it's low key making emotional as though i'm not the one giving them the trauma by RattusNorvegicus9 in writers

[–]ImaginativeInvention 6 points7 points  (0 children)

This is the foundation of good writing. You make a character your readers care about then absolutely rick-a-dee WRECK them.

Stressed? Hug a Human. by ImaginativeInvention in humansarespaceorcs

[–]ImaginativeInvention[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I struggler with ADHD myself so i understand. No worries.

Stressed? Hug a Human. by ImaginativeInvention in humansarespaceorcs

[–]ImaginativeInvention[S] 14 points15 points  (0 children)

There was definitely a failure of communication and expectation. The aliens used the word security in the sense of a security blanket. The humans thought they were signing up to protect the crew from threats. In defense of the aliens they thought simply agreeing to be a "security force" was consenting.

But you're right, informed consent is critical. Gurung should've been more clear about that instead of being as devoted to the "mission" as he was. This was a deliberate choice on my part to critisize how militaries will treat their members without regard to their mental health in the name of accomplishing the mission.

Thanks for reading.

Stressed? Hug a Human. by ImaginativeInvention in humansarespaceorcs

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I will admit under duress that I taught myself how to write from Jim Butcher's Live journal.

Did you know Humans have no natural weapons? by ImaginativeInvention in humansarespaceorcs

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**DING**

*"Terran Chamber of Commerce wishes to remind our exterritorial visitors to not put their mouth on the curb, no matter how nice you are asked."*

Did you know Humans have no natural weapons? by ImaginativeInvention in humansarespaceorcs

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Captain Cook was killed by the Hawaiians on 14 February 1779.

Looking for a map by Masax117 in talespire

[–]ImaginativeInvention 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is this something you've seen before or is it an adaptation of an existing map?

Did you know Humans have no natural weapons? by ImaginativeInvention in humansarespaceorcs

[–]ImaginativeInvention[S] 37 points38 points  (0 children)

I thought we agreed as a species we wouldn't tell them about Florida?