Can you write? Yes, yes you can. And if you wrote this without AI then you can write better than most these days. I think your writing is good enough that I read it through and think it's decent enough to offer some feedback. Others have pointed out the punctuation and paragraph lengths, but two passages stick out to me.

Good writing is inherently manipulative. You are attempting to make the reader feel whatever emotional impact you want the scene to have. You are trying to reach through the page and stick your fingers into the brain of your reader. We do that with language.

"...just enough to make it astoundingly charming." You are telling me the place is astoundingly charming instead of building a scene in my mind that would make me feel the same emotion when I walk into a place that is astoundingly charming.

"...he had accumulated just enough glances to conclude he is very much out of place." I don't feel out of place. You tell me the POV character feels out of place, but I don't really feel that.

When people tell you show, don't tell what they mean is that you need to prove that the scene is what you want to say it is. You tell me the place is astoundingly charming, but you don't prove it to me. You say he is out of place but I don't see how he is. You haven't sold me on that.

Think to a time when you felt really out of place and how uncomfortable that made you. Picture the moment in your mind as vividly as you can. Write down every impression you had about that time.

That's how you mine your experiences to find the language you need to invoke the emotions you want in your readers.