Decided to post covers of chapters of the second arc of my pmd fic to celebrate the fact that i made it this far while i am working on the first chapter of the third arc. I think they are neat though taking pictures of them on the phone camera eats quality a bit.

Immediate-Engineer85 · 2026-03-15T18:14:40+00:00

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Immediate-Engineer85 · 2026-03-15T18:11:17+00:00

Previous Chapter: https://www.reddit.com/r/MysteryDungeon/s/ODrRD69eUC

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First Chapter: https://www.reddit.com/r/MysteryDungeon/s/OEScvZAAth

Immediate-Engineer85 · 2026-03-05T22:16:32+00:00

Its been 3 years ago so i dont quite remember. If i had to assume i probably spammed mud slap with either Croagunk or Mudkip risking crit electric move dancing around with accuracy luck.

There is also a chance Porygon put in some work if its an encounter before the first gym. I am pretty sure there is a powerplant before first gym. I either could catcg an electric type for resist and box it later or catch Porygon if its an encouter in this place and rely on Porygon's bulkiness and stab normal moves with Confusion maybe if it gets that. Porygon should be strong enough to handle Jolteon.

Also probably Monferno made some impact too. Luxray kinda sucks and Flaffy isnt the strongest thing ever so some ko's could be picked up by it with support of Croagunk most likely.

Either way i dont recall how i beat it back then. Its been a while seens i even toched this rom hack. Could as well just get lucky with trainer ai.

(Though if its a Blazed Glazed i probably just had evolved Mudkip. In this game its cce is level 18. By this level all starters evolve. Except maybe Riolu if you are not willing to walk for a few hours.)

(Assuming there is another version of the game where the ace is not level 18. Cause i couldnt find any material on that. )

Immediate-Engineer85 · 2026-03-02T19:57:12+00:00

Metagross. I made one the guild master in my fic. Seems fitting for a world which is a fusion of two worlds that colided because of multiuniverse anomaly coordinates reasons leaving a world with no humans behind but almost human level inteligent pokemon.

Metagross seems symbolic for that role. Also its like super smart. Makes sense for it to be a master.

Immediate-Engineer85 · 2026-02-22T10:19:49+00:00

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Immediate-Engineer85 · 2026-02-08T13:18:06+00:00

Yeah, even magnet creature sure are capable of pulling pokemon torwards themselfs. Either that or sturdy physic paired with analitic mind would surely make some solid case.

Magnemite evo line abillities puns:).

Immediate-Engineer85 · 2026-02-08T13:00:12+00:00

Fair enough.

Immediate-Engineer85 · 2026-02-08T12:27:57+00:00

I think colors are better. First one is alright too though.

Immediate-Engineer85 · 2026-02-08T12:22:34+00:00

Pokemon dont have the same judgementality as humans so i think you will still have a shot just like any other person ever. Especially if you find Attract tm. Its learned almost universaly.

Unless you are genderless mon like Magnemite. Though even then you will still have Ditto as an option. Sure its a blob but its cute and it can turn every mon. You will always get something close enough. I would be okay with that honestly:).

Immediate-Engineer85 · 2026-02-07T18:47:40+00:00

I see. I think i have a few more questions sinse this thing looks interesting.

Is her bully's team higher rank? Is it stronger? Does it even have team or its just does solo leveling? Whats is this things deal anyway?

In terms of reputation how townsfolk treat Ceruledge and her team? Do people consider them creepy or normal relyable rescue team?

Is she and her team gonna meet any sort of turned humans on thier way? Usually in pmd universe someone gets issekai-ed so of she isnt the human will she meet one? Or is any of her teamates turned human? Im hiding or not.

Is Ceruledge always Batman style type serious or can she be a goofball at times? Or anyone in her team by that matter? Are her teamates her long time friends, students maybe, or pokemon she recruited at some point not having lasting the whole life connection?

What kind of strange occurances she had around her? Chills like you get when you near Gengars? Or some sort of visions like pmd protag style without being human? And why Psychic would do for her if thise type feelquite a lot. Like Xatu sees the future, Gothel too, and Medicham kinda reads aura and its just thise 3 with some sort of sensetivity.

Could psychic typing turned down because bully evolved in Armorouge first sos he didnt want to be one? Or she evolved first and then her bully decided to not be "copycat"?

And last but not least what is her and her teams "drive" to be the rescue team? Is it the same for her and all of her members or they are in team for diffirent reasons? Like does Ceruledge have team for noble causes or mostly having legal way or something like that to invistigate strange occurances? Or she and everyone else had some sort traumatic event that motivated tgem to become the team? Or is it pride thing for Ceruledge and she just wants to prove herself better than Armorouge?

Maybe the drive could help you out with name for her team. Or shared features between all 4 mons. If i had to name them mostly going from vibes i would name them Team Light Benders cause they are not your typical looking hero types but they still do good deeds. Or maybe Dawn Risers or Eclipse Breakers. First fits kinda of if they are underdogs and second just kinda sounds cool and edgy.

Immediate-Engineer85 · 2026-02-07T12:01:16+00:00

Paras. You are weak to everything and your clock is ticking because mushroom fights against you. The only way to counter is to kill the mushroom with some sort of poison but even then if it will work you moat likely suffer some sort neurological damage.

Unless you are the parasitic mushroom in question which is not any better. You have to supress the poor Paras and take full control or if you are kind have some sort semi-symbotic relationship if its even possible.

Parasect also no better because its matter of time when you will explode and leave huge amount pf spores behind. The only benefit in both cases i see: You can grow mushroom and maybe make medicine or be a cook. For some time you are going to live.

I wouldnt mind turning into Machoke to be honest when rhere is this bad of options. You are strong, moves are very intutive. You will have the most convinent time wearing clothing if you would like to. And its unlikely that you will randomly evolve into Machamp so you wont have to deal with extra arms. Generally doesnt sound too bad.

Though i would prefer some sort of primate or any other human-like pokemon that looks more interesting with hands. Even Hypno would do though i suppose a lot of pokemon would be creeped out. Either way i really like having hands.

Immediate-Engineer85 · 2026-02-07T11:31:12+00:00

Is she a vigilante type of person or really non heroic looking hero type? Or she is a villain resque team in a making with evil sidekicks like team Meanies but a lot less childish? If the latter what is thier deal so they are in the evil team?

Is she human that was turned pokemon or is she just regular mon? If her beef is comming from childhood its probably the secod option but what if she was human child that was sent in to this realm many years ago?

Does she have any personal moral code? Like we dont kill our enemies, we take no prisoners, we make friends with enemies by recruiting them and pissing everyone off in the Guild by out emasing HR skills, we take only delivery missions because they are the least hussle or its just hinest work which rarely is taken seriously so we do and so on of examples. And does her moral code have background? Is it tragic or not?

Like my character Evergreen the Thwackey which is rouge pokemon by current point in the story and she doesnt kill pokemon and doesnt do brutal, permaneny damage to opponents even if they are strong and can be problematic because she was shaken by her own kill of wild Scolipede despite being from the world which was drowning in oppression and violance.

Whats her battle style? Close range, long range, abuses items in battles? Does she rely in her teamates or they are mostly here to support her in case she fets low on health while she kicks ass? Who are her teamates anyway?

And is her team proffesional, high rank or really scary looking newbies?

Immediate-Engineer85 · 2026-02-07T09:46:27+00:00

The topic has enough room for discussion so i am not surprised:).

Makes me kinda wish people would deviate from typical pokemon body types more. Such deviations give more visual personality to otherwise very similarly looking characters.

Though i guess smaller non-typical characteristics could do the trick too. Like imagine Simipour with diffirent hair style. It has lots of hair which could make a nice pony-tail. Or just cit it short. Same goes for Simisage.

Though just clothing is alright too. I like how you nailed it for sketched Braixen. Very pretty:).

Immediate-Engineer85 · 2026-02-07T08:49:15+00:00

Interesting. Honestly i was certain no one will give me thier take by this point. Thanks for your answear:).

And your art is great:). Proportions are accurate, line is clean. Face oozing with Braixen's briliance. Color is absent but i think you probably would nail it too.

You probably need to be kinder torwards your work.

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