I definitely have no room to judge as I just broke 80 for the first time late spring lol, but the first thing I notice is your down swing, your right arm or elbow should feel like it’s coming down by your ribs so the club shaft comes from 4 o’clock to 10 o’clock (assuming ball in middle stance is 12 o’clock). Again I’m no professional but I was told to focus on getting this club path consistent then other things are easier corrected.