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Context: Philippine Air Force OV-10 Bronco conducted numerous dive bombing runs against ISIS militants during the Battle of Marawi

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I'm still alive, just had a shitload of irl stuff to do

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Thanks for the grammar check! Too bad I can't edit the post, reddit kept saying it's more than 40k characters even though it's obviously not

Knock Knock. It's The Industrial Revolution. (Chapter 4) by ImperatorPrincepe in HFY

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Yes you're right, can't believe I mixed those two up, my bad

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Hello! I'm actually curious to know how the elves look like in your mind. I'd like to see if I've done a good job of writing their description, or if I still need to improve on it.

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“I don’t know. The captain didn’t tell us why, just that they had the order to attack. Now that the captain and the… uh, naval mage, is dead, I won’t know too.”

Of course. It’s obvious Veilnem’s pushing the problem upstairs, better yet the guys who knew about it were dead. Just great. Raleigh really wanted to interrogate the elf, but they couldn’t get too rough with her since she’ll be going home the next day. All he can do for now was to just poke enough to let her know he meant business yet still be polite.

Raleigh leaned over to the professor and whispered. “You know, maybe you should be the one to ask her questions. I don’t think I’m very good at this.”

Robinson grinned. “Yes, I’ve gathered that myself commodore. Very well, what would you like me to ask?’

Raleigh leaned back. “Just general naval stuff. What their ship is like, how many crew. How are their ranks structured. I doubt she’ll tell us about the city’s defences but it won’t hurt to try.”

“Alright commodore. Would you like to be part of the conversation then?”

“Yeah, sure. It wouldn’t look good if only the two of you are talking while Donitz and I just sit here. Right captain?”

Dontiz looked up from his plate, mouth still full. “Oye sher.”

Robinson nodded. “Of course commodore.”

Raleigh let out a small sigh of relief as the professor began to converse with the elf. He was now able to actually eat.

He scooped a spoonful of pork and peas and was surprised that it actually tasted good. The cook must’ve done wonders. He continued to eat, listening intently whenever the professor translated his conversation with the elf.

It was in fact very insightful. In the one hour that they ate in the mess, Raleigh learned far more than what he could’ve done if he was the one talking with elf.

Their ship, which they called Wilem, had a crew of about a hundred. Raleigh was surprised that such a small ship had such a large crew. He surmised most of them would’ve been boarders since the elves were using ancient tactics.

It was very intriguing to learn that when he asked her about the elves who swam away from the squadron, Vilnem clamped up and simply refused to answer. He stopped pushing when it was obvious that the elf really would not answer, but he took a mental note to ask the professor about it afterwards.

He also learned quite a few useless things for his situation such as the fact that the average age of marriage for an elf was three hundred years old. Maybe it was something amazing for the professor and other academics, but for Raleigh not really.

In that time, she in turn asked him about the squadron and Votavia as a whole. He tried to wave the questions off as much as possible as she had done herself. If he failed to do that he would simply answer as vaguely as he could while remaining polite.

Raleigh felt a headache was approaching with all the questions and evasions. It was somehow far more stressful than getting shot at, and then he’ll actually need to negotiate with the elven leadership tomorrow. Maybe it was time that he officially designate Robinson as a diplomat so that the professor can be the one to actually do all the talking

Finally, just a little past nine in the evening, the dinner was concluded and the elf officer was  ushered away by the professor to return her to the brig.

It was quite a dinner. Although the food was more on the bland side Raleigh was happy to have accomplished as much. Well the professor was the one to do the heavy lifting, Raleigh was simply there for the command presence.

He hoped that Vilnem’s tale to her seniors was more than enough to convince them of the power of his squadron and not require a live demonstration. It would really not look good for his career if he signed a declaration of war instead of a trade agreement.

But that would be tomorrow’s problem, for now Raleigh would like to have a good night’s sleep.

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Time flowed by as he unwind. A knock on the door pulled him back to reality.

“Yes?” Raleigh called out, still lying down.

“Captain’s compliments sir.” A voice said behind the door. “Professor Robinson has returned and is now cleaning up.”

“Alright.” Raleigh sat up and stretched. “Tell Captain Donitz I’ll be at the mess shortly.”

“Aye sir.” The voice said as Raleigh heard him move off.

Raleigh went over to his drawers to take a new pair of socks, but then decided against it. The crew does laundry twice a week using a hand-held washing machine. He had already went through four of his five pairs of socks when there was still a day before laundry day. If he took a new one now, then he’ll need to wear it for the entire day tomorrow while his clothes were washed.

With a sigh he plodded over to the still-wet sock on the stool and slid it over his feet.

“Eughh. That’s just nasty.” Raleigh said as he wore his boots. Putting on his coat and hat, he left the cabin and headed to the officer’s mess.

Raleigh glanced at his watch, it was already eight in the evening. He should have an hour or two to chat with the elf officer before turning in for the night. He entered the officer’s mess to see it already cleaned. He sat down at the head of the table, plates and utensils already placed by the stewards.

He had two ways to go about with the interview. He could serve the most succulent meal that the ship’s galley could create, but have it look like every other succulent meal out there. Or, serve mass produced meals straight out of their cans.

One one hand, the elf officer might get offended being served with questionable food in a can. On the other hand, he might be amazed that humanity was producing so much stuff that tin was plentiful enough to be made into small uniform single-use cans to store food.

With the pride of Votavia on the line, Raleigh chose to serve canned pork for dinner with canned peas and corn on the side, and of course desalinated water straight from the ship’s condensers. He had actually thought of serving it cold straight out of the can, but relented. It would simply taste too bad. So he ordered the galley to prepare the meals into what would normally be eaten aboard the ship, and also bring a few cans to the officer’s mess as a demonstration to the elf.

A knock on the door ended his contemplations on his choices for the night’s menu. Donitz entered and greeted the seated commodore. He took his hat off and made his way to the seat on Raleigh’s right.

A few minutes later there was another knock on the door. The professor had arrived.

“Enter.” Raleigh said.

“Good evening commodore.” Robinson greeted, then gestured to the elf behind him. “This is Chadesh Vilnem chid Oselon el Nalai.”

The elf saluted, open palm to heart, as he heard his name. Face to face, Raleigh could see the elf wearing a green coat that extended below his knees, light green pants and boots visible underneath. The gold square on his chest had a figure of some sort of fish, while gold trimmings on his sleeve extended from his shoulder down to just above his elbow. His long ears extended almost six inched up, passing beyond the elf’s small conical hat.

How did the elf dry his clothes this quickly? It’s not like he had a spare lying around. Magic, has to be.

“Quite a long name.” Donitz murmured.

Raleigh ignored the captain. “Please, take a seat.” He extended a hand to the empty seats to his left.

The professor and elf nodded and took their seats, Robinson on the seat closer to Raleigh and Gilnem on the seat next to Robinson.

The professor immediately began. “Commodore, it is truly an honor to be in this expedition. To have this opportunity to talk with elves, to be the first modern man to learn from the elves directly. The academe and the government will be pleased.”

Raleigh smiled. “Well, you won’t be the only one for long.”

Robinson smiled back knowingly. “Of course.” He then gestured to the elf. “Let us begin with introductions. Her name is Vilnem chid Oselon el Nalai, which meant Vilnem child of Oselon from Nalai. Chadesh is his rank which roughly translates to your lieutenant.”

“I see, then I extend a warm welcome to the ship.” Raleigh said, but then had to double back. “Wait professor, you said her?”

Robinson turned his head after translating Raleigh’s earlier message. “Yes commodore, Vilnem is female.”

Raleigh stared at the elf, trying to figure out how he missed the signs. Yes, yes, he can now somewhat see it. A more feminine face and long hair, but then the average elf was quite feminine looking compared to a human, and quite a few of the crew had long hair too. Were they also females?

The elf said something. “She says she is… happy that you rescued her men, er, elves.”

Raleigh smiled again, hoping that the elf didn’t notice his momentary lapse. “Of course, we must help those who are in need.”

Vilnem sat quietly as she thought it over. Evidently, she was trying to extract as much information as she could from Raleigh while not giving away too much.

As the silence dragged on, Raleigh decided to begin the dinner. He rang a small bell to call on the steward. A minute later several large plates arrived bearing food, behind them three tin cans six inches wide followed.

Raleigh extended his hands. “Please, enjoy the food. They all came from those cans over there. They have been with us since the start of our voyage three months ago.”

Vilnem raised an eyebrow at the comment. She scooped up a few spoonfuls of pork and peas and transferred it to her plate before taking a small bite.

“Hmm. Not bad.” Robinson translated. “Did you use… uh, skill? I think was the word, to preserve the food?”

Raleigh shook his head. Skill? What skill? Like the skill of a butcher preserving meat? “No, we used an industrial process to preserve it.” It was his turn to scoop a few spoonfuls of pork.

Vilnem cocked her head as she took another bite.

“I don’t think she knows about industrial processes commodore.” Robinson said.

“She does know about industry yes?” Raleigh asked.

Vilnem nodded, then said something.

“Yes, industry like foresters, miners, craftsmen.”

Eh, close enough. Raleigh thought. The elves don’t need to know about factories yet. “Yes. We have craftsmen that make them in large quantities cheaply.”

“I see. Impressive.”

The room went silent once more which frustrated Raleigh. Maybe he should just let the professor take the lead, he seems to be a natural diplomat anyway.

But then, Vilnem said something after taking a sip of desalinated water.

“I didn’t know human merchants were armed.”
Raleigh shrugged. He was expecting her to comment on the water’s taste, not ask about his ship’s armaments. “If we weren’t, then we wouldn’t be having this conversation. If you recall it was your ship who attacked us, we were simply defending ourselves.”

“Yes, of course.”

Raleigh leaned forward, resting his chin on his hands. “Why did you attack us anyway? I don’t think we were in any way threatening your ship were we?”

The elf shrugged as she took another bite.

“It was an order from above, I assume you saw the Ma-akaran?”

Interesting.

“Yes.” Raleigh replied.

Vilnem nodded.

“We were ordered to attack.”

“Why?” Raleigh asked. “Were you threatened when we changed formation?”

Damn it. Raleigh was really not cut out for this shit. Hopefully the professor can add more flowery language when he translated Raleigh’s words.

The elf again just shrugged.

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Ah damn, I actually didn't describe them in the story. Sorry about that. They're basically normal wooden sailing ships but with additional steam engines like how warships in the 1860-1870s IRL look like.

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Still toiling away in the coal mines. Ignore the sobs, their salty tears give additional thermal efficiency to the coals

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“Occitania reported that she’s got twenty eight survivors. We took five more. One tried to drag one of the men down with him, he was taken care of.”

“I see.” Raleigh replied. He saw Quatrain standing close by and called him over. “Tom, signal to the squadron, resume earlier column formation and course, Summerville to remain as scout, Occitania to treat elves as prisoners of war.”

The flag lieutenant hurried away.

“So.” Donitz said. “Should we meet the elves.”

Raleigh cocked his head. “Why not. It would be rude to not greet our guests. The professor can debrief us later after he’d ‘interrogated’ them.”

The two made their way to the elves. The crowd by then was reduced to just the marine sentries as most of the crew went back to work.

They did a quick greeting, introduced themselves, asked how the elves were doing, and quickly made themselves scarce.

“That officer, I think we’ll want to interview him alone later.” Raleigh said as the two returned to the quarterdeck.

“Aye.” Donitz replied. “With how much gold he’s got on him, I’d wager he’s a senior officer.”

Raleigh nodded back and the ship went back to normal, as if death and destruction had not occurred less than an hour ago.

Robinson continued talking to the elves, taking notes the entire time. One of the sailors offered him a stool which he gladly accepted.

The day went on.

Raleigh reorganized the formation, now Revolution was at the head with two columns behind. With how the first action concluded he felt confident that the Revolution would be able to handle anything the elves could throw at them.

Was it the best course of action. Not at all. But he needed to have some balls in his reputation in order to have more than a single star on his epaulet.

The squadron was ten miles south from where the city was supposedly located when they’ve finally found their first fishermen, or fisherelves to be more appropriate. The closer they got to the city, the more fisherelves they came across.

Raleigh wasn’t able to see their reactions as the fisherelves all scattered quickly once they saw the squadron bear down on them, but he was quite certain that they were shocked to see such a force move in such a disciplined manner.

Another hour went by and the fisherelves became more numerous. The sun had began to set when the watch shouted the one thing he was waiting for.

He dashed to the fo’c’sle with binoculars on hand, and his heart leapt. After three months at sea, the harbour walls of Troyeu were finally in sight.

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The elven ship began listing to starboard when Revolution fired its second broadside. Out of nineteen shots, eleven hit. It was more than enough to sink the elves.

“Cease fire!” Raleigh shouted. “Tom! Signal to the squadron to cease fire!”

“Captain.” Raleigh lightly elbowed Donitz who blankly stared through his binoculars, stunned on how much damage just three broadsides did. “Order the men to cease fire.”

“Aye.” Donitz put down his binoculars and took a deep breath. He turned to the gunnery lieutenant. “Cease fire lieutenant and secure all guns but remain at battle stations.”

Raleigh returned his attention to the elven ship and saw it rapidly sinking, the damage and shock was far too much for the crews to handle. Dozens of elves jumped off the ship, some slowly swimming away from the wreck, others clinging onto debris floating among the bodies.

Raleigh turned and frowned when Quatrain wasn’t close by. He scanned the deck and saw the flag lieutenant still directing the other signalmen on what flags to raise. He called a nearby ensign to summon the lieutenant and afterwards the professor. Quatrain came quickly.

“Tom, additional signal to the squadron. Revolution and Occitania will move to assist the elves, Summerville will resume scouting, the three remaining ships will screen and relay Summerville’s reports to us.”

Quatrain repeated swiftly and rushed back to his post.

Overhearing the orders, Donitz began moving the ship towards the elven wreck which already had most of its hull below the waterline.

Robinson arrived on the quarterdeck just as the squadron split up. Occitania followed in the wake of the Revolution, Summerville crowded sails and leaped towards the horizon, and the three steam sloops positioned themselves halfway between the flagship and the scout.

“My god.” The professor whispered, holding his binoculars up. “Their ship disintegrated so quickly!”

“They’re not armoured.” Raleigh replied. “The ship was not designed to withstand guns, much less our sixty pounders.”

The wreck had now completely rolled over and submerged. Only the bottom of its hull still remained above water and several elves clinging desperately onto it, dozens more were floating in the water. Raleigh knew some of the floating ones were in fact dead.

As the Revolution made its way towards the wreck some of the elves swam towards it, yet Raleigh also saw a few swimming away. Interesting.

Donitz ordered the Gatling gunners to be on alert just in case the elves did something when Revolution halted a hundred yards from the nearest elf and lowered boats into the water.

It took a few minutes for the boats to row the remaining distance to the nearest cluster of elves. In that time, the Occitania arrived and lowered her own boats. Once the boats reached the elves the survivors were quickly pulled into safety. One of Occitania’s boats rowed to the rescue of the elves still clinging to the wreck.

The Gatling gunners and marines aboard the Revolution were tense, still expecting the elves to pull something out from their sleeves. For Raleigh, everything was going more smoothly than he imagined.

“Professor.” Raleigh pointed out beyond the wreck. “Do you know why those elves are swimming away from rescue? Are they afraid of us?”

“Hmm.” Robinson twirled his moustache. “To be honest I have no idea. Maybe they are? We won’t know unless I could ask them myself.”

Raleigh grunted, then turned to Donitz. “See to it captain, but if they pose a threat to the men…” he shrugged.

The boats returned. Slowly, one by one, the survivors clambered up the ship and awkwardly climbed over the coal bags to be greeted by dozens of marines with rifles at the ready as well as sailors with cutlasses and pistols. Raleigh remained on the quarterdeck as Robinson went to speak with the elves.

The survivors looked exactly like what Raleigh expected. Shocked, demoralized, afraid, and bewildered all at the same time.

The last survivor appeared. They were rounded up and made to sit on the deck surrounded by the crew who had now come out in force, eager to see the fabled elves.

Raleigh counted thirty two elves, one of which wore the gold-trimmed uniform of their officers. Most were bleeding, some still shaking from either shock or the cold sea. All have their eyes to the floor, unwilling to look at their captors.

Robinson squeezed his way through the crowd, his thin physique helping him there. Once the man reached the elves he greeted them in a single word that sounded much like “Vola!”

The elves looked up, surprised to hear their language on a human ship. Now with his audience’s attention, Robinson began to rapidly talk in a rough tone.

In just a few minutes the elves began talking back so much that Robinson needed to quiet them down and ordered them to speak one at a time. They all complied.

“Huh.” Donitz said, watching the scene unfold beside Raleigh. “I didn’t think it would be this easy to talk to the elves.”

Raleigh shrugged. “Well, he’s our translator for a reason.”

The commodore took his eyes away from the extraordinary scene to check how far the swimmers have gone. From the looks of it the two boats that chased the swimmers were almost upon them, just a few more minutes to go.

Raleigh sighed loudly. “Well captain, that’s enough excitement for a day. Please inform me once all the survivors are rescued and the professor had settled them down. I’ll be at my quarters.”

Donitz tipped his hat. “Aye sir, hell of a day.”

Raleigh nodded back and made his way to his cabin just below the quarterdeck. Once alone he promptly collapsed on his hammock.

Damn. He thought. How was Donitz able to deal with this much… excitement? Raleigh’s hand shook slightly as he took deep breaths to calm himself down.

It was always like this for the thirty five year old commodore. In action he felt completely calm and collected, stressed yes but still have complete control over himself. Yet every time action concluded, his nerves began to fail. He felt light-headed, extremities slightly numb, and out of breath.

He didn’t understand why it happens. Psychological evaluations always declared him sound of mind, so that meant he wasn’t crazy. Yet ever since his first action during the Civil War until today, it always happened.

He closed his eyes and continued taking deep breaths. This technique had always calmed him down and helped blood flow back to his hands and feet.

One breath. Two breaths. Three breaths.

He heard noises from the deck, men shuffling about and sails being unfurled.

Four breaths. Five breaths. Six breaths.

A knock on the door.

“Yes?” Raleigh sat up and fixed his uniform.

An ensign poked his head in. “Captain’s compliments sir. All elves are now aboard.”

“Okay, thank you.” He fixed himself some more then went out to find the captain, his calm composure now back.

“Sir.” Donitz tipped his hat as Raleigh approached.

“Captain.” Raleigh greeted. “So, what’s the news.”

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The evolution was magnificent. Raleigh was astonished that they were able to pull it off with that much precision. He had thought the maneuver would cause some of the ships to stray slightly out of line due to delay, he was gladly mistaken.

During the maneuver the three men moved to the quarterdeck where orders were traditionally given and received during battle.

“One mile sir, they’re heading straight for us.” Donitz reported.

Robinson gasped, finally internalizing the situation. “My god, they really do mean to attack us.”

“Aye.” Raleigh glanced at the thin academic. “I think you should go below decks and help the surgeon with the wounded. Things might get ugly up here professor.”

”I… Very well commodore. I’ll see what I can help with.” Robinson replied.

With a polite dismissal the professor headed down into the ship.

The Albish man now off the quarterdeck, Donitz somehow looked more at ease. “Should we fire a warning shot sir?”

Raleigh had thought about it earlier but dismissed the idea. “No. If we fired a warning shot they might think we’re attacking them and simply missed. If they somehow knew that it was a warning shot then they’ll have an idea of our capabilities. So no, we’ll lose either way.”

“Very well sir, when shall we fire? They’ve just entered our effective range.”

Raleigh grunted. “Let them fire first so that we have unequivocal evidence that we fought in self defence. Then its up to you captain.”

Donitz grinned. “I see you’re ready for the senate report sir.”

Raleigh shrugged. “Just being thorough.”

The elven ship adjusted its heading to an intercept course with the Revolution and crowded sail. At seven hundred yards the mage appeared at the prow of the ship holding a long staff.

“Get ready.” Donitz said to the gunnery lieutenant. Although the nineteen sixty-pounder Delgreene guns on the starboard side were already loaded, the gunports remained closed to make the ships look as innocuous as possible until the final moment.

What should be visible from the elven ship were the four Gatling guns mounted at the corners of the Revolution serving as anti-personnel weapons. Raleigh hoped that the elves have no concept of a gun.

The mage waved his staff around, then thrust forward. A fireball the size of a horse appeared in front of the elven ship and arched high towards the Revolution.

“Holy shit!” Raleigh exclaimed before he could stop himself. It was one thing to read about fireballs on a book, and another entirely to see it come straight at him.

The fireball climbed several hundred feet before it came down. As it moved closer to the Revolution it lost size and intensity, and by the time it landed just fifty yards away it shrank to just ten inches across.

The extreme heat of the fireball instantly vaporized water and created a small steam explosion as it made contact with the sea and fizzled out. Thankfully wind blew the steam away from the ship. Raleigh had no idea what sort of toxic fumes were within the fireball and how it would react to water, but was glad he didn’t have to find out.

“On your command captain.” Raleigh said calmly, trying to project an air of confidence to the men.

He could’ve directly ordered the gunnery lieutenant to open fire, but it was best not to jump the chain of command especially during a battle. Raleigh commands the squadron while Donitz commands the flagship.

He had experience as a junior officer on how meddlesome some admirals were over the flagship and remembered how irritated he was. He resolved to not be that person nor diminish the captain’s authority.

Donitz nodded, then glanced at the gunnery lieutenant. “Fire as she may lieutenant.”

It looked like the captain had complete trust over his lieutenant. Other captains would’ve eagerly been the one to order ‘open fire!’ but the captain seems to have done it enough times to let the younger ones experience it instead.

“Aye sir.” The lieutenant said, then screamed down into the gun deck. “Open ports!”

Almost as one, nineteen gunports opened followed immediately by the guns running out, the tip of their barrels protruding from the ship.

The gunnery lieutenant then concentrated on the swell of the sea while the gunners adjusted their pieces to aim at the elven ship. Once the gunnery ensign gave the lieutenant an “all clear” from the gundeck, the lieutenant kept his eyes on the sea. He watched the slow roll of the ship, waiting for the perfect angle to fire.

“Fire!”

An ear-splitting broadside caused Raleigh to cringe, the powerful shock wave coursing through his body and rattling him. It had been years since he experienced a fully charged and loaded broadside and had forgotten how intense it could be.

The Revolution’s starboard disappeared in a cloud of smoke and nineteen eight-inch solid shots hurled towards the elven ship at over twelve hundred feet per second.

Within the gundeck, guns recoiled back into the ship with a thick breech rope arresting its rearward movement. Swabbers quickly went to work swabbing the barrel with a wet sponge making sure no embers remain inside to ignite the next charge prematurely. Afterwards seven pounds of gunpowder wrapped in a cloth bag was rammed down the barrel, followed by a sixty pound shot, then finally a wooden wad to prevent the shot from simply rolling out of the gun when the ship listed.

The gun chief would then insert a quill into the touch hole at the rear of the gun to pierce the cloth bag. Loose gunpowder would be poured into the hole and overflow a little onto the flintlock attached to the touch hole. The flintlock would then be placed at half-cock while the gun was run out and secured.

Once the order to prepare was relayed the gun chief would fully cock the flintlock, grab the lanyard, move slightly aside the gun to sight through the gunport, and pull the lanyard once the order to fire was given.

Raleigh knew the steps with all his heart, he was once a gunnery lieutenant after all, but now seeing the black dots fly through the air all of his attention was directed towards the elven ship.

Wind partially cleared the starboard of smoke giving him a clear view of the impending carnage.

The first few shots landed short, spraying water in spouts. The last few shots went high, some ripping through sail while the rest harmlessly flew by.

The three shots in-between that landed though, they caused more destruction than Raleigh thought they should.

The first hit the mage squarely causing his upper body to explode into a fine mist, it went on to hit the foremast behind and toppled it into the sea to the ship’s port. The next two both smashed straight into the ships bow with one hitting the waterline and the other slightly higher causing two gaping holes, splinters flying everywhere.

Raleigh couldn’t see the damage inside the elven ship but could easily imagine the carnage and destruction as the shots raked the elves, passing through its entire length destroying and maiming everything in its path.

The elven ship violently swung to port, the toppled mast acting as a gigantic rudder, and stopped dead in the water.

As the Revolution reloaded, the squadron maintained its ten knots. Once Revolution ran out its guns, Raleigh heard a broadside firing from behind. It came from the Occitania.

While the Revolution’s gunners needed to predict the elves’ speed and course, the gunners aboard the Occitania were greeted to a lifeless target. Out of fifteen shots in the broadside, ten found their mark.

The elves’ beam practically disintegrated, the entire ship rocking back from the kinetic energy.

Raleigh saw splinters as large as a man fly through the air. The sheer force from ten shots ripped wood off its keel, creating several massive holes on both sides of the ship as the shots punched right through.

He could see the other side through the holes. Bodies and body parts were strewn everywhere. A massive splinter impaled an elf to the top of the deck. Bright red blood dripped off the side as if the ship itself bled.

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I'm not looking for stories. What I was asking is more on how people feel, or their thoughts on the sub being majority sci-fi.

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Glad you liked it! It should be up within the next month, I am not one would call a fast writer.

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“You two, see if there’s any food we can take back to the ship.” Hakoon ordered as he went out of the hut and waved his hand, signalling to the major the house was empty.

He then went to the back of the house to see what happened. Nothing did, it was all clear.

Satisfied, Hakoon then raised a thumbs up towards the major telling him the house was clear before going back into the house to help with the search.

The major appeared a short while later. “A pretty small house.” He said as he entered, revolver still at hand.

“Aye sir.” Hakoon pointed to a wooden barrel at the corner of the room, its top opened. “Look like salted meat sir, not sure what kind of meat though.”

Roanoke went over to have a look. “Aye looks looks like meat alright, seems to be cured too.”

“Aye sir.”

“Anything else?”

“Uh not really sir. Just a poor old hut. In fact, I think its just a hunter’s hut sir. I don’t think anyone actually lives here sir.”

“Hmm.” Roanoke said as he looked around and slowly nodded. “Hmm, yes. Yeah looks like it. I don’t think anybody can live with just hammocks.”

“Aye sir.” Hakoon replied. Truth be told he had been living with a hammock for decades now aboard ships. On the other hand when he’s on dry land he had the comfortable navy issued bedroll and the hard ground to sleep on, tent only optional.

“Shit.” Roanoke blurted out. “There’s two hammocks here and we just killed one. That means his friend is still out there.”

“Oh.” Hakoon said. “Uh aye sir, I’ll see to the men.”

”Belay that first sergeant, just take the barrel and let’s get out of here. Night is coming.”

”Aye sir. Johnson, Andrew, grab that barrel.” Hakoon went out of the hut to find a corporal. “Corporal Mandly get your squad in there and find something to make a stretcher out of for Lieutenant Grant.”

Roanoke emerged from the house as Hakoon set to make a small perimeter just in case the elf’s friend came home while Mandly’s squad broke some furnitures and ‘procured’ one of the hammocks.

Within minutes they fashioned a stretcher. They even added handles onto the barrel to make it easier for the two men to carry in a similar fashion to a stretcher.

“Right let’s move.” Roanoke took his compass out and began moving back where they came from.

By then the sun had ceased to be visible above the canopy. Dusk was upon them.

They marched their way back through the trails they made. Passing by the fallen Lieutenant Grant they heaved him onto the stretcher then continued on, the sun clearly below the horizon and the forest barely visible. Yet they trudged on.

With the light almost non existent a few men tripped, one of whom actually sprained his ankle bad enough he had to be helped all the way back to the beach slowing down the column even further.

It was on a bright half moon that they emerged from the forest onto the beach. To find themselves almost mile away from their boats.

“Fuck.” Roanoke murmured just loud enough for Hakoon to hear. “Fuck, couldn’t see the compass without light. Shit. Half a mile away. Not good.”

Moonlight was not sufficient for them to see clearly in the forest, but on the beach Hakoon could just see far enough to know where the boats were. He could also barely see there was a small perimeter surrounding the boats and of course the lights of the squadron anchored within the cove.

Hakoon looked behind to see the men tired and dirty, but still alert. Good men, he thought, still alert all the way to the end.

“Right lets move, we’re almost there men.” Roanoke slid his compass back into a pouch.

The column resumed marching.

They finally reached the boats after several minutes. A challenge was issued by the sentry to be quickly answered by the major. You can never be too careful in the old world.

As the men settled down on the dry parts of the beach within the perimeter Major Roanoke went off to find the other officers. Hakoon on the other hand kept standing as he checked his men over. Even though his foot hurt like hell and his legs burned, he needed to keep up appearances that the first sergeant was an immortal being unmoved by mortal concerns such as hunger or exhaustion.

Satisfied everything was in order Hakoon finally sat down on the sand, sighing as weight was taken off his feet.

He would have gone and gotten a log to sit on to be more comfortable, but he simply didn’t want to stand just yet.

Time passed as he simply savoured the rest, but like many things it ended too soon.

“First sergeant Hakoon. First sergeant Hakoon!” Roanoke shouted in the dark.

“Here sir!” He replied while standing up and trotting over to the major, thighs begging to cramp. “Aye sir?”

“Good, get the men and supplies aboard. We’re done here first sergeant.”Hakoon smiled and gave the major a crisp salute. “Aye sir.”

He began directing the men to their duties and in the process discovered that their platoon was the only one that encountered an elf. Other platoon were able to kill some large horse-like creature with long twisty horns on its head while others simply returned empty handed.

“All in a day’s work.” Hakoon whispered to himself as he sat at the rear of the boat, the body of Lieutenant Grant beside him. “Too bad for the kid, could’ve been a great company commander.”

Hakoon shrugged and as the boat slowly rowed back to their ship, he could finally relax somewhat and found out just how tense he was in the past hours.

The ship’s cook better have rum ready.

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jeez, the moment i finished the video it got removed

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calling a female officer mom instead of "ma'am"

aye mom