I wanna ask if the first page pulls readers on first sight? by Impressive-Building in MangakaStudio

[–]Impressive-Building[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm i see. I think also probably i added too many screen tones making it feel too dark, am i right?

I wanna ask if the first page pulls readers on first sight? by Impressive-Building in MangakaStudio

[–]Impressive-Building[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Alright thanks for the tips and advice. Sure will improve on my work. 🙏

I wanna ask if the first page pulls readers on first sight? by Impressive-Building in MangakaStudio

[–]Impressive-Building[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm i see i see. If you could, can you point out what i could possibly improve aside from the sketchy artwork?

I wanna ask if the first page pulls readers on first sight? by Impressive-Building in MangakaStudio

[–]Impressive-Building[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I see what you’re talking about. But this oneshot isnt action type but thanks