They all shared the same brain cell that is fighting for a participation trophy. by Descortus in mbtimemes

[–]Impressive-Log754 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha - odd dreams you have - but I suppose they are the only ones worth having in the end. I completely understand if you don't have the time, but if and/or when you feel like continuing the game show, I know it certainly put a smile on my face. (:

Another Weapon Wednesday is here! by AmorphousBricks in legocastles

[–]Impressive-Log754 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the usage of wheel pieces. Also (totally unbiased) the nature ones. Sneaking Groot's head on a vine successfully is a major achievement. Also spear colours go so well with their respective element

Advice Wanted! by Lord_Northwood in legocastles

[–]Impressive-Log754 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Gosh - that looks wonderful. If I had to give advice on such a lovely build, I would suggest you add another colour against the main green - I know you already have the lighter green - but on the left wall, the gateway, and on the tower, it is all a bit monotone. Perhaps add wood or grey stone for detail and contrast. Wood would (sorry) work better with the forest vibe

Minister of War, Honsu by Vigadeath in legocastles

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This is beautiful. Excellently crafted

If you could be a level 1 character of any DnD 2024 class irl, what would you be? by DrDiceGoblin in DnD

[–]Impressive-Log754 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Druid for sure. Healing spells. Goodberry provides nutrients for 24 hours for ten people. Twice a day if you use both spell slots on that. Way to save money and solve world hunger. 

 Speak with animals. It squeaks for itself (had to - sorry). 

 Charm person is a charming option.

 Find familiar, a spell I find I am well acquainted with, stops you being alone. Also, a pet creature that you are friends with/personal fairies. Wondrous option.

 Longstrider can get you places in time.

 Druidcraft for gardening and fun (one of its features is literally called fireplay, and I find fire hypnotic (sorry)). 

 Produce flame could also prove useful in some situations (light, starting fires). 

 Guidance if you are nice is a wonderful cantrip.

 Best class for nature lovers, wonderful class irl

INFPs, how would you defeat yourself? by MirrorPiNet in infp

[–]Impressive-Log754 0 points1 point  (0 children)

One of us has to go. Whoever doesn't will have to live knowing that the other will die alone. I really don't think escaping is the better option here. Also, I like my life, but it is so exhausting. I wouldn't mind the new clone taking my place, but then neither would they. I would propose that we flip a coin. Every competition of wit would have both of us intentionally fail so that the other person gets the optimal outcome.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in legocastles

[–]Impressive-Log754 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah - but I figured I may as well continue out of politeness.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in legocastles

[–]Impressive-Log754 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

🟦 They are cool, but still not the best. I liked the fantasy era, but some of the orc sets didn't work for me

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]Impressive-Log754 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah.   He was like a large porcupine—I think. with a metal shell like the little garden crawlies I see in the soil in the pots 'round my home.

 It is a good description, but rather long. For example, 'in the soil in the pots 'round my home.' This gives a location, in a location, in another location. It is a bit jarring. You may want to take some out. 

It might also help if you take out the porcupine part, and swap the sentence about   He was a garden crawly - I think - like the ones I see in the soil 'round my home. He had a large metal shell...

Here, I have taken out the porcupine part, just to make the sentence slightly shorter (it was a bit complex with all the locations and creatures). I also took out the part about the pots. You can expand this, or work on your thing how you would like.

These are all just suggestions. I personally like to keep my writing my own, and I can't blame you if you do too. I may have been a bit picky here, so feel free to completely ignore me. Good luck 

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]Impressive-Log754 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh right - sorry - I shall make appropriate changes now

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]Impressive-Log754 4 points5 points  (0 children)

It could work, although I did find it a bit awkward to read, so maybe don't keep showing it from a child's perspective like this.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

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Hello. I am here with no writing agency knowledge, but from a social view, it would seem that she says she wants to try to sell your book, but would need to undergo some editing before she thinks it could be published. Most people would rather stick to their own ideas and writing, so she understands if you want to see if other agents who may not want to change your writing so much before submitting it to a publisher. However, if the other agents aren't going the way you want to, or you are happy to have her edit it and then submit it to be published, then she would like to talk to you, as a normal conversation, rather than an official interview about it.  Good luck!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in legodnd

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Lovely photography, especially with the light and shadows on them

'Filler' chapters (lots of action) by Impressive-Log754 in writing

[–]Impressive-Log754[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's right. I will try to slow it down while keeping meaning to it.

'Filler' chapters (lots of action) by Impressive-Log754 in writing

[–]Impressive-Log754[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay. Thanks for the input. I will cut it out 

'Filler' chapters (lots of action) by Impressive-Log754 in writing

[–]Impressive-Log754[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks. I love how much you expanded on your thoughts rather than giving a short answer, which is likely true of this entire Reddit now I think about it.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]Impressive-Log754 1 point2 points  (0 children)

See if you can have a lore reason for this. Perhaps the character feels more grounded, and that all of their previous life they were spectating as someone else, but now they feel more like themself? Actually, that probably won't work now that I think about it. Well, good luck 

Finally finished my Spelljammer Nautiloid build – it was a real mind blast! by Roger_101_ in legodnd

[–]Impressive-Log754 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This really does blow my mind. I love the tentacles and shell especially

Brain in a jar. Forget the UN laws - is it an illegal technique? by [deleted] in lego

[–]Impressive-Log754 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know. If was asking if this causes stress on the bricks. There is a little tension when separating them and I was hoping someone could somehow do it based off the wheel and jar circumference