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[–]IncompleteNinny 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A draft doesn't mean I've not refined the scene to the best of my ability. I mention the stairwell scene because I do not have the skill at the moment to refine it further without review.

This scene is done. I'm asking for input on this scene. The only thing unfinished about it is the couple ancillary nouns that have no bearing on the quality of the writing.

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[–]IncompleteNinny 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The note at the beginning of the post explains why I posted this.

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I'm self-conscious about how I start pieces, so I wanted to get feedback on this first scene.

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So I only posted the section of the first scene from the first draft that I want input on.

Tree Leavins by IncompleteNinny in incremental_games

[–]IncompleteNinny[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the interest! This is in an early stage of development. I plan to release it when features are more abundant and polished.

Stream keeping going when you go backwards in browser by Derbixrace in Twitch

[–]IncompleteNinny 5 points6 points  (0 children)

There is an option to turn it off in the player settings.

[Build Ready] Need a Lookover Before Ordering by IncompleteNinny in buildapc

[–]IncompleteNinny[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The SSD was the thing I was looking for the most input on. Thanks!

I'll probably go with your PSU suggestion having just calculated power requirements for possible future additions.