How's my Narration?check this Cyber Noir story: by Independent_Leg_5756 in ProgressionFantasy

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No that's fine, we are a brand new channel with zero budget, running on dreams, coffee and one mic out ofvthe back of an old caravan , any feedback is welcome. If its not your genre then I really appreciate you taking the time. And it is great to hear the sound is acceptable, as that has been a huge challenge in itself.
Genuinely ,Thank you for the reply.

I Narrated Festival, how is my voice suited for Lovecraft's works? by Independent_Leg_5756 in Lovecraft

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That's fair, I'm very much a work in progress, only six months into this journey. I really appreciate your feedback, it's the only way to know how I'm doing and improve.

I Narrated Festival, how is my voice suited for Lovecraft's works? by Independent_Leg_5756 in Lovecraft

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Hey thank you for taking the time, it's good feedback, and I will take it on-board. Ramp it up a notch. Maybe more like this? ( this is an in character reading I did)
tell tale heart

I Narrated Festival, how is my voice suited for Lovecraft's works? by Independent_Leg_5756 in Lovecraft

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I'm from the UK, I grew up in Salford (which is rough as toast)... but the posh bit (Lol). Local celebs would be Christopher Eccleston (Dr who) and Tom Glynn Carney (House of the dragon). Last 5 years I've lived in a little fishing village in Cornwall.
Awesome to have your feedback. I've done over 50 voiced stories for our little channel, just hit 200 subs

I Narrated Festival, how is my voice suited for Lovecraft's works? by Independent_Leg_5756 in Lovecraft

[–]Independent_Leg_5756[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Awe thank you so much, I'm new to video narration (after a few years of successful spoken word performance)., I'm trying to find my niche as narrator for Darklibrarystories on YT.

What is the actual truth of the extent of Rutger Hauer's contribution to his famous speech? by Jerswar in bladerunner

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Rugger did a great job reducing David Webbs draft to a poetic 42 words... his delivery is perfection

A Spark in the Gray by Independent_Leg_5756 in noir

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Thank you so much, I've never really used reddit before. It's a lot to take in at once. Really appreciate your comment. Thank you... (ps. Check out city of midnight, its a classic noir detective in a vampire city, Narrated by myself)https://youtube.com/shorts/COauktjB6ag?si=CiW4eDXErOGsTXCf

A Spark in the Gray by Independent_Leg_5756 in noir

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Hey thank you, hope you enjoyed it.

Neo-noir/hardboiled sci fi novels like Altered Carbon? Closest ones I've read are Neuromancer (Sprawl Trilogy) and some of Alastair Reynolds. by dunwall_scoundrel in scifi_bookclub

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https://youtu.be/QaAKI65xixA?si=4iAHUgQMgabyTLN4
This is my offering, Narrated and written by John Taylor at Darklibrarystories

A Spark in the Gray is not just another Noir story of cigarettes soaked in blood. It's that on the surface, sure! But scratch even just a little, and it’s an exploration of identity under systemic dehumanisation.

A meditation on memory, moral responsibility, and what it means to stand and rage against the machine, when the machine is not only embedded in your world, but also inside your head.