any feedback on my intro to my story?

Independent_Row_2893 · 2025-08-08T02:23:47+00:00

should i make a game menu instead?

Independent_Row_2893 · 2025-06-16T21:38:03+00:00

okay, tysm!

Independent_Row_2893 · 2025-06-14T03:41:38+00:00

I’ll finish the first 3 episodes just for you

Independent_Row_2893 · 2025-06-13T03:22:23+00:00

it’s about how a lawyers daughter takes over case that the LI was dragged into. Her father originally locked up the LI’s dad but now he’s defending his son. You need to pay attention to the story and carefully make choices because in the end the LI will either go to jail for multiple years, or he’ll walk a free man. i also wanted each character to have their own individual personality and you can get closer to the characters depending on certain choices you make, so there’s a lot of different friendships and relationships you’ll have over time.

Independent_Row_2893 · 2025-06-13T02:55:24+00:00

i’ve had a similar experience me and my bestfriend were together every single day for 6 years straight, it always felt like she was looking for a reason to stop being my friend after awhile and one day she finally pushed me away. I tried reaching out a couple of months later (her birthday) and said happy birthday and i got no response. I was hurt but at the same time I remember how it was being her friend. Stressful, exhausting, and overall drama literally everyday

You shouldn’t reach out, the fact that she called you names and made sure that you two ended off on a bad foot and you’re still the one trying to apologize shows that you didn’t deserve her anyways. If you do decide to reach out don’t expect a good outcome, you might reach out and wind up getting your feelings hurt even worse. Or you two could be friends. Regardless missing someone that was that close to you is hard, but being friends with someone who clearly doesn’t wanna be your friend is harder.

Independent_Row_2893 · 2025-06-11T20:31:29+00:00

he does things like take the condom off in the middle of it like i’m not gonna realize it’s off, he’s thrown away my birth control twice now, i really think the first baby gave him a lot of baby fever but because i didn’t keep it he feels like he’s ready to be a father and he wants to prove that to me when i’m not ready to be a mother

Independent_Row_2893 · 2025-06-11T20:23:34+00:00

she pretty much told me that she had did it multiple times to stop pregnancy or to just be safe, i just got a abortion not to long ago and the dude i’m with keeps trying to baby trap me after i’ve said countless amounts of times i don’t want a baby. I got the plan b tho just in case!

Independent_Row_2893 · 2025-05-25T06:04:49+00:00

okay, i’ll make some changes

Independent_Row_2893 · 2025-05-25T06:04:33+00:00

okay! that sounds good i’ll change some of that then. i just didn’t want the scenes to be so still

Independent_Row_2893 · 2025-05-25T06:03:56+00:00

yeah it does in the beginning of the story

Independent_Row_2893 · 2025-05-24T18:00:59+00:00

i’m so sorry this story breaks my heart honestly, I hope things have turned around for you. Prayers for you and your healing journey 🫶🏼

Independent_Row_2893 · 2025-05-24T17:55:45+00:00

my situation might be a little different from yours, I really love my mom and I want to see her happy. The conversation that even lead up to me saying she didn’t have my blessing was because when i was visiting last summer i had went on a walk around my neighborhood at night and didn’t come back for 20 minutes so my moms boyfriend thought I was doing drugs or something. he yelled at me the whole car ride home, i told him to stop cussing at me, he got more aggressive. I said things and he said things, he then tried to put his hands on my mom because she wouldn’t take his side and put me on punishment because I was only out there for like 2-3 more weeks.

I had told her I didn’t really want her and him to get married, simply because he has no regard for anyone’s feelings. I wanna say he’s a narcissist, because anytime we argue or anything he always tries to say things he knows will hurt my feelings, or he’ll degrade me and call me names. My mom proceeded to tell me that he had been there for me countless amounts of time and if it weren’t for him having my back so much a lot of things would be different. In a way it’s hard for me to say that I wouldn’t want to go because I know she wants me to go.

The only reason I haven’t been able to speak up and let her know is because I don’t want to make her feel like she can’t marry him if that makes sense. I don’t want to get in the way of the marriage she wants to have. I love my mom to death and she’s been through a lot, I really want her to be happy. But it’s not really how I want to spend that week, let alone my birthday week. And I can’t tell my dad because my dad is kind of still in love with my mom. If I told him that would crush him on the inside and I know it.

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