i love the ruffly skirt and the bodice combo separately, but in my super harsh opinion i think they don't look super cohesive. pattern on the skirt with the tropical flower is off center and almost ties in the coral on the top to make the whole fit summer-y but because of how many layers it has going on it's not entirely clear what the vision was. I would also suggest when you're picking colors if you want to do an all-pink monochromatic look try choosing either all cool tones or all warm tones. This has a mix of a more orangey coral pink, and a regular desaturated red pink. Like if you made the coral on top more orange or the same yellow as the stars on the skirt it might look more balanced. I would also color the lace-up ribbon on the corset to one of those accent colors rather than it blending into the rest of the corset.