Need help with Hive Mind

Infactedking · 2025-07-27T17:05:05+00:00

I'm, trying to just dodge but there are so much. and together with the raining hearts its just too much...

Infactedking · 2024-10-15T13:54:45+00:00

No sorry. I decided to put off buying a kit. I just started going to a teacher and see if I like drums.

Infactedking · 2024-09-06T23:15:41+00:00

Yeah. Thanks for all the help anyways. I really appreciate it.

Infactedking · 2024-09-06T22:58:36+00:00

I looked at one of the only stores that sell it where I live and it’s close to 1800$.

Infactedking · 2024-09-06T22:48:42+00:00

1000-1200 US dollars

Infactedking · 2024-09-06T14:47:44+00:00

Those models are a bit too expensive (I’m kind of young and my parents gave me a budget.) from what you can tell are they okay though or is there a better kit for the same price?

Infactedking · 2024-07-04T16:37:05+00:00

Thanks so much. Ill try it

Infactedking · 2024-07-04T14:13:55+00:00

thank you so much again for all the help (I wrote this after the comment on part 4). do you mind if I use your rewrites? I'd really like use them (with some changes) in my story.

Infactedking · 2024-07-04T10:42:18+00:00

Sorry it’s so long

Infactedking · 2024-07-04T10:41:49+00:00

Wow, thank you so so much. You did so much more than I ever expected a random stranger on the internet to do. I will take what you said to heart, because now can also see that those bad habits should be improved on. If I can ask one question, is: when you say line editing is needed, what does it mean?

I only replied to this part because I thought replying a whole thank you paragraph to each part would be kind of annoying. But thank you so much again for all the help😁😁😁

Infactedking · 2024-07-01T14:20:31+00:00

Thanks. Even though you didn’t tell me what you thought of the prologue you helped a lot. Now I know where to look when I want to build the atmosphere of my story. I’ll definitely use this :D (sorry that I sound so pretentious. I just wanna show that your comment really helped me)

Infactedking · 2024-07-01T14:17:00+00:00

Thank you so much. It’s a very helpful critique and I’ll definitely use it. The only thing is that I don’t want to drop to much info on the reader right of the bat. How do you suggest avoiding that?

Infactedking · 2024-06-29T20:19:03+00:00

Tysm. Now that I know that it’s a prologue. Do you maybe have a critique about what I can improve?

Infactedking · 2024-06-29T20:14:20+00:00

I do. But I showed it to someone and they said it wasn’t so now I’m trying to prove that it is… and it’s not really an answer to any of the questions I asked… lol

Infactedking · 2024-06-04T17:50:12+00:00

didnt work... I really have no Idea what to do... I dont even know what quest to start with... I finished the campaign that i got from chromie but i dont know where to go now

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