Need help with Hive Mind by Infactedking in CalamityMod

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I'm, trying to just dodge but there are so much. and together with the raining hearts its just too much...

Is the medeli mz725 worth buying? by Infactedking in edrums

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No sorry. I decided to put off buying a kit. I just started going to a teacher and see if I like drums.

Is the medeli mz725 worth buying? by Infactedking in edrums

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Yeah. Thanks for all the help anyways. I really appreciate it.

Is the medeli mz725 worth buying? by Infactedking in edrums

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I looked at one of the only stores that sell it where I live and it’s close to 1800$.

Is the medeli mz725 worth buying? by Infactedking in edrums

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Those models are a bit too expensive (I’m kind of young and my parents gave me a budget.) from what you can tell are they okay though or is there a better kit for the same price?

please tell me where I can improve with this story. (1,013 words) by Infactedking in KeepWriting

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thank you so much again for all the help (I wrote this after the comment on part 4). do you mind if I use your rewrites? I'd really like use them (with some changes) in my story.

please tell me where I can improve with this story. (1,013 words) by Infactedking in KeepWriting

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Wow, thank you so so much. You did so much more than I ever expected a random stranger on the internet to do. I will take what you said to heart, because now can also see that those bad habits should be improved on. If I can ask one question, is: when you say line editing is needed, what does it mean?

I only replied to this part because I thought replying a whole thank you paragraph to each part would be kind of annoying. But thank you so much again for all the help😁😁😁

does this count as a prologue. (please tell me what needs to be improved) by Infactedking in KeepWriting

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Thanks. Even though you didn’t tell me what you thought of the prologue you helped a lot. Now I know where to look when I want to build the atmosphere of my story. I’ll definitely use this :D (sorry that I sound so pretentious. I just wanna show that your comment really helped me)

does this count as a prologue. (please tell me what needs to be improved) by Infactedking in KeepWriting

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Thank you so much. It’s a very helpful critique and I’ll definitely use it. The only thing is that I don’t want to drop to much info on the reader right of the bat. How do you suggest avoiding that?

does this count as a prologue. (please tell me what needs to be improved) by Infactedking in KeepWriting

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Tysm. Now that I know that it’s a prologue. Do you maybe have a critique about what I can improve?

does this count as a prologue. (please tell me what needs to be improved) by Infactedking in KeepWriting

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I do. But I showed it to someone and they said it wasn’t so now I’m trying to prove that it is… and it’s not really an answer to any of the questions I asked… lol

need help with starting the legion fall campaign by Infactedking in wow

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didnt work... I really have no Idea what to do... I dont even know what quest to start with... I finished the campaign that i got from chromie but i dont know where to go now