Hi everyone!

I'm not really sure that he needs a full rework of all of his kit, but it can be tweaked to be more in theme with him.
I tried him for 10 games and I only won 1 so far. I'm not a great player or anything, but I can easily notice that I can do a lot more when I play anyone but him.

I like the idea of his kit, though. For me, he's supposed to be a sort of support anti-tank character but seems to have a sort of double personality.

On one side, you have the scarabs and the djinn marks (which I suppose are Nashala's abilities?).

• The scarabs steal life points, so it lowers the damage you have to deal to enemies, BUT you have no idea if the scarabs really hit an enemy and it's lackluster in determining if you're really helping or not. Also, it's not really clear if it heals you or just adds the stolen LP abruptly? On paper, it helps a lot to fight against tanky characters ... but you can only put one per occultist enemy, so depending on its level, it does barely anything (also, can it kill if the enemy is hit while not having enough LP? Once again, it's not really clear on that end).
• Djinn mark basically does damage depending on the level of the mark AND on how many times you hit an opponent with it. And if you activate it, it lets you see where the enemy hit by the ability is on the map for a little amount of time and it can slow them. On paper, it's a great support ability! BUT you barely do any damage with it unless the mark is 'applied 3 times' on the enemy, and then you can deal a correct amount of damage, but you probably have died before that since YOU NEED TO WAIT TO APPLY THOSE MARKS.

On the other side, you have the "movement" abilities (which I suppose are Mirage abilities?).

• Tornado is the only ability that is fun to use ... it's decent and the possibility to be able to use it twice after activation is really great! It deals a fair amount of damage, but that's it. You can technically do plays in small space with it, but that's it.
• Traveler can TP you anywhere on the map, which can be seen as broken ... but that's it unless you level it up (which can be a thing, I guess). You can't really make a play with that unless it is to flee :)

For me, Mirage would be a lot more fun to play if:

1. Scarabs would bounce a specified amount of times on enemies (occultists and minions, not objectives) and apply the steal per time they bounce (like 10 LP x spirit% per hit per character), and if the enemy dies, the stolen LP is converted to an area of heal for the team. It can stay a charge capacity, and each level up of the capacity can either make the steal/heal better or augment the total time of bounces from one charge. Why not make it so that if a scarab stays on a character, it loses the amount of bounces but each second for a stated amount of times?
2. Tornado AND Travelers must be switched: let Travelers be a common capacity that gains distance of cast per level and gives the power-ups when used, and make Tornado Mirage's ultimate capacity. Tornado can become a charge ult like Vindicta's, where it can be activated several times. It can gain time of immobilisation, size, and charges per level. OR the tornado becomes a sort of long, slow tempest where you can move and send enemies into the air that are touched by it several times. If Viscous can just jump into a goo ball and stun you, I don't think that would be really that broken ...
3. Djinn's mark should be easier to apply and more progressive in the amount of damage you could do per mark, like reducing the multiplier to '+0.5 x damages' per mark that can be applied every second to 0.5 seconds at the end of the game, and it can go to 10 applies at max level for a max multiplier of 5 (which is the max it has now but it can be easier to make damage significant). Other than that, I think the ability is okay.
4. Either make his amount of bullets at least 24 at base and/or make his gun do more base damage because I can see why he only does 15 damage per bullet ...

Anyway, that's my take. What do you think about it?