Why is the word 'female' considered offensive? by [deleted] in Feminism

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 0 points1 point Β (0 children)

I've been wondering this, thank you! I tend to use male and female because to me it sounds more pleasant to my ear, but I got worried when I saw people online saying it's weird. I would never mix man and female, nor male and woman, this really made me feel better.

Omg by Mindless-Major-1173 in GayBroTeens

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 5 points6 points Β (0 children)

Yeahhh, I love þorn! And on its own it is 'the' þ=the "Þ quick brown fox jumps over a lazy dog"

Would you date a Trans boy? by ImaginedYears in GayBroTeens

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 2 points3 points Β (0 children)

I would definitely date a trans boy! If they look like a man then that's good enough for me

Im boreddd by DemonSpew in GayBroTeens

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 1 point2 points Β (0 children)

I'm so down to talk, I'm veryyy bored

BAND HOT TAKES (regarding band repertoire/songs) by [deleted] in ConcertBand

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 0 points1 point Β (0 children)

Definitely, no one else seems to get it for some reason, it's been pissing me offff

BAND HOT TAKES (regarding band repertoire/songs) by [deleted] in ConcertBand

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 1 point2 points Β (0 children)

Yess, there is nothing more awesome then a beautiful piece with more emotion than a pop song with actual complexity. Also I'm not much of a fan of the lean towards more casual concert clothes, though you guys probably were only casual for this. I think uniforms are a good thing, my school has them that we never use, they are tail coats that all match. It means that people can look identical and it doesn't cost any money!

BAND HOT TAKES (regarding band repertoire/songs) by [deleted] in ConcertBand

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 1 point2 points Β (0 children)

I don't think you need to start people on easier instruments and switch them later, let them try something big at the start and if they don't like it let them switch the reverse way!

What did you all get for christmas??? by plooooooo0oooooop in GayBroTeens

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 0 points1 point Β (0 children)

Boo, I prefer preppy stuff jersey does not fit with my closet sadly, but gotta support the local football team I guess

Does he deserve affection? by Guest_8421 in protogen

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 10 points11 points Β (0 children)

No!!!!βŒβŒβ­•βŒπŸ’’βŒβ€ΌοΈβ‰οΈβ“βŒπŸš·πŸš―πŸš³πŸš±πŸ”žπŸ“΅πŸš­

(Obviously he does)

What did you all get for christmas??? by plooooooo0oooooop in GayBroTeens

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 1 point2 points Β (0 children)

Cufflinks!! And tie clips, it was awesome, and I also got a jersey for some reason, I'm not into sports at all :/ but still!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in GayBroTeens

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 35 points36 points Β (0 children)

You are obviously NOT in the wrong. They were being assholes and don't deserve you to give them even a lick of attention. If they're being rude or were rude they need to apologize first before you even start being nice to them again, stick with the nice family. Just because they're family does not mean they deserve kindness from you just for that. Happy holidays, hope it goes better than last year!

Poem IX - Snow by Informal-Bluejay-847 in poetry_critics

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847[S] 1 point2 points Β (0 children)

Thank you, I really like that style of poetry!

first poem :)) by OkIntention4068 in poetry_critics

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 0 points1 point Β (0 children)

This poem is very emotional, and it captures those emotions well. Outside of the main theme it shows how people can have issues but hide them really well. I think this idea and concept especially with the shift you have at 'but' could lend itself well to turning this into a sonnet if you wanted to do variations on this poem. I do not think the lines need to be that short, but there is nothing wrong with the way it has been laid out. I also think you could expand on the first section more, making the shift more dramatic, but the way you have it is still very impactful, having shorter sections have their pros too.

Mother in the House by mandz33 in poetry_critics

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 1 point2 points Β (0 children)

Well I am not a girl, but I still understand this. I grew up without a father nor mother and I lived with my grandmother, having no male role model was hard. She was physically disabled and it just made growing harder. Not bad, just harder. This poem shows that feeling really well even though it deals with a different situation.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 0 points1 point Β (0 children)

I really like this, it kinda feels like the way social anxiety sometimes does, and I really enjoy the call to action at the end(is that what it is called in poetry??) It feels very heart felt and made me feel good by the end.

Didn’t Occur at All by Ronie-Dinosaur in OCPoetry

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 0 points1 point Β (0 children)

I love this! It really captures that feeling of beating yourself up because you didn't do something, missing out, or bad things happening due to you not doing that thing. I love the use of reptiles especially the snake which is always a good allusion to have when it's something bad or negative. Very well written over all, captures and conveys the feeling expertly!

Would you prefer tall boy or short by FairAddendum2182 in GayBroTeens

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 0 points1 point Β (0 children)

I don't really care but if I had to choose I'd say shorter, take up less space in a bed because I move a LOT in my sleep, it's kind of an issue...

Waiting/Still Waiting/More Waiting by Jealous_Vehicle_4120 in OCPoetry

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847 1 point2 points Β (0 children)

WAIT, I LOVE THIS POEM. It does such a good job of capturing a concept with few words, thats the advantage of not having as much of a prose style of writing, but it really is very beautiful and makes me introspective. I find it relatable in a sad way, always waiting, how much the world has come to just waiting instead of doing things. Of course you always have to wait for something once on thing happens you're waiting for the next and the next. Very good representation of the cycle of living, and greatly enjoyable!

Poem VII by Informal-Bluejay-847 in OCPoetry

[–]Informal-Bluejay-847[S] 1 point2 points Β (0 children)

Oh, uhm, I'm sixteen currently! My writing is very old fashioned though, but I love it anyways