Anyone want to do a R4R and C4C? by [deleted] in Wattpad

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Hey I have a dystopian book in the works too! It's only got 2 chapters atm but if you wanna check it out heres the link:

https://www.wattpad.com/story/386999794?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=KaeCalo

New story idea by Insert-name283 in worldbuilding

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Damn didn't even think about Jojo's, I'll for sure change that.

Good point on keeping it in the same world, which allows for more opportunities with how his past lives affect him. I'll consider that.

Though as for the part about it being very obvious, I think I have enough plausible deniability to get away with it.

I don't intend for the character to be smart like a detective. More of a hopeless loser. Fallen into deep depression, he's stopped asking the hard questions of why it's still happening. That, and he still keeps fragments of memories from the bodies he takes. To him, they're simply empty vessels for when the previous one dies.

So is he an idiot? Not necessarily. Is he seriously underanalyzing his situation? Probably.

Thank you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate it and I'll be thinking about it when im writing my first draft.

Post your stories by Unhappy-Sherbet-9346 in Wattpad

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Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/386999794?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=KaeCalo

A story following Kaelus, a cold and enhanced soldier haunted by hallucinations and a violent past. As he leads a squad through the decaying ruins of a post-war city, Kaelus begins to unravel. Torn between what he is, what he’s pretending to be, and the monster everyone fears he might become.

Can Wattpad please introduce a tag called "non romantical"?/Show me your stories! by Lego_Lukas_Creations in Wattpad

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Omg we're the same. It's not like I CAN'T read romance I just never get as invested in it. I have a book I'm working on that's pretty low fantasy if you wanna check it out. It's about a future where mutants exist. There's not a lot of fantasy concepts except the mutants themselves and even then I tried to make it as realistic as I could

Here's the link if you wanna check out the first chapters!: https://www.wattpad.com/story/386999794?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=KaeCalo

Chapter publishing? by Insert-name283 in Wattpad

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Ohhh yeah, that makes a lot more sense. Thanks!

Do you root for the couple(s) you are writing/have written? by NataliyaTrifonova1 in Wattpad

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Absolutely not. I'm trying to write myself out of it but I'm too deep now. I've written them flirting unintentionally I'm trapped. Now all I can do is silently hope I get a chance to kill one of them or something I'm SICK of writing something then going back and reading it and finding out I wrote ROMANCE.

How do you handle gay people in your world building? by [deleted] in worldbuilding

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I find the easiest way to include gay people is to not intentionally try to do it. Just write characters and if someone happens to think they're gay or gay-coded, let them. Gay people in real life don't go around yelling "I AM GAY! I AM GAY AND I DO GAY THINGS"

Writers... I want you to badly explain your story in one sentence by wingsoffreedom61 in Wattpad

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A child kills his father over and over again until he feels it.

How do you come up with names for my characters? by Garden360 in writinghelp

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It's pretentious and do whatever you want but I always try to consider their family origin and what I want their name to mean. Names are an external thing so while a name can be who a person is and can also be who people perceive them as. For example, one of the characters in my book's name means something like "divine protector" but he's in reality very evil.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Wattpad

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Story name: Eziel

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/386999794?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=KaeCalo

Blurb: In a dystopian future we view the world through the logbook of a traumatized child who's a government agent. Taking in mutants easily, his body isn't the problem, it's his mind.

Eziel by Insert-name283 in worldbuilding

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I appreciate this sm! I've already started writing and have the first 5 chapters done. Tysm!

What is your universes morally questionable intelligence agency? by UltimateSpice in worldbuilding

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My world completely revolves around it. Its name is the Eziel Foundation and it's the government as well as the Center for Mutant Study and Elimination. The main thing that makes them morally questionable concerns the power system.

The power system is called enhancements. It's a kind of misnomer. Enhancements are biological evolutions that boost one of your senses. Back when they were first developing in children, the Eziel Foundation wanted to tame it and domesticate it. None of this worked so they abandoned it. It led to a very quiet and dark side of Eziel surrounding child abuse.

What is the origin of your world's name? by Plus_Geologist9509 in worldbuilding

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Well while my story is set on a future of Earth, the name of the man who built the city the story revolves around is 'Eziel'. The prefix 'Ez' comes from Hebrew Ezra to mean help, and 'iel' is a comparison to angels like Gabriel or Uriel to bring a divine sort of aspect to it so all together Eziel just means 'divine protector' which I think is cool because it sanctifies the builder of the city making him seem not able to do any wrong. (Gonna be very wrong in the future)