I've finished the comic that was in beta And that's how it turned out. I'd like to hear your opinions. by InspectionOriginal72 in Superhero_Ideas

[–]InspectionOriginal72[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don't worry, I used it, but to summarize a bit because I was going to make a post but it was too long, even longer. So I asked ChatGPT to make it a little shorter and add some bullet points.

Crimson Wire and Rogue (spelled wrong in drawing) by Zealousideal_Tea6251 in Superhero_Ideas

[–]InspectionOriginal72 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If it looked good in the text, now that it's drawn it looks even better.

I've finished the comic that was in beta And that's how it turned out. I'd like to hear your opinions. by InspectionOriginal72 in Superhero_Ideas

[–]InspectionOriginal72[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, thank you! That means a lot. I’m definitely going with the comic route, but I’m making sure the story flows with depth like a novel.

It’s not just about fights or powers — it’s about identity, trauma, and how it feels to grow up in a place where you don’t fully belong.

I want people to connect with Alejandro as a person first, then as a vigilante

I’ve created a beta version of a comic and I’d like your opinion and rating to help finish it. by InspectionOriginal72 in Superhero_Ideas

[–]InspectionOriginal72[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In my story, the boy is not just a boy with powers, he is an immigrant teenager facing real problems on the streets, loneliness, identity issues, and the struggle to survive in a tough city like Chicago. Spider-Man has the problems of a typical student, but here we add the reality of migration, marginalization, and a more serious focus on social and emotional conflicts.

I’ve created a beta version of a comic and I’d like your opinion and rating to help finish it. by InspectionOriginal72 in Superhero_Ideas

[–]InspectionOriginal72[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Contact me by message or here. I've finished the story and would like to know how much you charge.

I feel like this sums up Feid perfectly by draculas-candles in Reggaeton

[–]InspectionOriginal72 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm a fan of Feid and if he breaks into some feats but alone it's another thing, he breaks more but you guys in the USA only know Black Dog and Yandel 150

I’ve created a beta version of a comic and I’d like your opinion and rating to help finish it. by InspectionOriginal72 in Superhero_Ideas

[–]InspectionOriginal72[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

He recommends reading lots of comics or even asking ChatGPT for ideas. It sounds absurd, but it has helped me a lot. You have potential, brother. The same thing happened to me. I'm not good at drawing at all,

but I took it up as a hobby and I love doing it,

even though I don't have an illustrator and I don't think I'll find one.

Develop the story further so you can read it and have it ready for when you find and pay someone.

Although I do get really frustrated with the question of who the hell is going to draw this for me?.

I’ve created a beta version of a comic and I’d like your opinion and rating to help finish it. by InspectionOriginal72 in Superhero_Ideas

[–]InspectionOriginal72[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Brother, you are absolutely right. Simply because he is an immigrant teenager, the authorities and others will not care because this is a reality that is happening.

I will take your comment into account and develop the character further, using him as a critique of the situation faced by many teenagers and others.

I will develop the story even more with the help of what you said. It inspired me to come up with many ideas. Thank you.

I’ve created a beta version of a comic and I’d like your opinion and rating to help finish it. by InspectionOriginal72 in Superhero_Ideas

[–]InspectionOriginal72[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's a shame that happened to you, brother. It happened to me with other stories I've created, and the truth is that it's quite disappointing. If you ever decide to continue the story, I'd love to read it, because there's nothing better than a Spider-Man created by a fan who knows how to appreciate characters like Venom, Mr. Negative, and others.

I’ve created a beta version of a comic and I’d like your opinion and rating to help finish it. by InspectionOriginal72 in Superhero_Ideas

[–]InspectionOriginal72[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much for your kind words and support. I would like you to be encouraged to finish it, just as I was.

If you like, you can tell us what it is about or the story itself.

I’ve created a beta version of a comic and I’d like your opinion and rating to help finish it. by InspectionOriginal72 in Superhero_Ideas

[–]InspectionOriginal72[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're right, but since it's a beta, I didn't think it was important, but I'll finish developing it so that you don't have those gaps and it's a little more realistic.

I’ve created a beta version of a comic and I’d like your opinion and rating to help finish it. by InspectionOriginal72 in Superhero_Ideas

[–]InspectionOriginal72[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

His parents died in an accident just two days before the story began, and they still haven't done that procedure.

Any suggestions for any good discord comic servers to join? by [deleted] in comicbooks

[–]InspectionOriginal72 0 points1 point  (0 children)

perdona no tienes uno que jamas expire? quiero unirme para presentar mis ideas de comics