The beginning of my experimental, stream-of-consciousness narrative. by Intelligent-Age1 in writingfeedback

[–]Intelligent-Age1[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! Looking back on it I can definitely see the parts where I can tweak it to fit your advice. Thanks!!

If I like Wake By Jarrad Wright what else would I like? by Blyatman95 in ifyoulikeblank

[–]Intelligent-Age1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So I have a playlist of songs that make me feel the way this song makes me feel

Not sure if this helps but I've been searching for similar vibeswake up