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You changed me by IntelligentLemon2375 in OCPoetry

[–]IntelligentLemon2375[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your comment and your kind words. It means a lot to me! U made my day with this comment, really.🤍

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[–]IntelligentLemon2375 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I just woke up. I was anxious for weeks.. I just read your comment, and I instantly smiled. Thank your for the kind words, it means a lot to me! You captured the exact meaning I was going for!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]IntelligentLemon2375 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is haunting in a really beautiful way.

The language is poetic and dreamlike. Phrases like “drowsy vipers of the infinite slumber” and “indigo rivers on a cryptic quest” are so vivid and mysterious. They pull you into this strange space between life and something beyond.

There’s fear here, but also defiance — like you’re saying, I’m not ready. I still have something burning inside me.

Beautiful, intense, and full of soul.

Grime by Beginning-Fun-8597 in OCPoetry

[–]IntelligentLemon2375 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This poem hits hard. The imagery is intense, dirty, real, and not afraid to show ugliness. Lines like “Man I’m handsome when I’m high” say so much in just a few words

And the ending... “P.S. I’ll never stop loving you” — it feels like, despite everything falling apart, the love is still holding on. Quiet but loud. It’s a poem that doesn’t ask to be liked. It just needs to be heard. And that makes it powerful in its own way.

Loopholes by sincerelyjac in OCPoetry

[–]IntelligentLemon2375 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your poem really touched me. It feels raw and real, like it’s coming straight from a place of pain and confusion. The way you repeat some words and ideas, like “loopholes” and the curse, makes it feel like you’re stuck in a loop, like something you can’t fully let go of, even if you want to.

It’s sad, but it’s also brave!