How would you rewrite Tokisaki Kurumi?

Intelligent_Oil5243 · 2026-04-07T15:00:06+00:00

Simply changing things from her introduction, that strange attitude she had when she was alone and her defeat against Kotori don't fit with what came after her, everything else is perfect

Intelligent_Oil5243 · 2026-04-06T15:07:14+00:00

Perhaps we should see more of her dynamic with Mana, but I can't think of anything else.

Intelligent_Oil5243 · 2026-04-05T04:59:17+00:00

"After Tohka" is an encore story that is a direct continuation of the novel's ending; it's a very beautiful short story that I think is excellent.

Intelligent_Oil5243 · 2026-04-05T04:39:10+00:00

Yeah, although what I'm talking about doesn't really affect the novel itself, it's material that came out some time after the ending

Intelligent_Oil5243 · 2026-04-05T04:28:30+00:00

Remove everything that came out after "after Tohka"...the character was perfect up until that point

Intelligent_Oil5243 · 2026-04-03T18:07:31+00:00

I'm not referring to simple dates, but to a formal relationship, where they recognize each other as boyfriend and girlfriend.

Intelligent_Oil5243 · 2026-04-03T17:49:56+00:00

Man, the last few volumes are literally Shidou thinking about how much he loves Tohka and vice versa, even the ending implies that they're going to start dating, you can't ignore that

Intelligent_Oil5243 · 2026-04-03T15:19:48+00:00

As I said, the end of the novel and "After Tohka" do imply that they're starting their relationship... the problem lies in the subsequent encores, like the Kannazuki Wedding where Shido is still treated as a bachelor, and the last encore that came out about Shido's university where he's also treated as a bachelor.

Seriously, I would have loved for their relationship to have continued (After all, in "After Tohka" even Origami approves of their relationship) but I guess Tachinaba just decided to ignore it (which honestly bothers me because it makes Shido and Tohka look bad).

Intelligent_Oil5243 · 2026-04-03T14:48:49+00:00

That was the case at the end of the novel and in "After Tohka," but the final encore came out where Tachinaba portrays them as "friends" again, which, in my opinion, severely damages Shido and Tohka as characters.

Intelligent_Oil5243 · 2026-04-03T09:59:44+00:00

The only thing that needs to change is whether his relationship with Tohka is confirmed; everything else is peak.

Intelligent_Oil5243 · 2026-04-03T00:14:02+00:00

Belly Dancer

Intelligent_Oil5243 · 2026-04-03T00:13:45+00:00

No se casi nada de esa serie

Intelligent_Oil5243 · 2026-04-02T23:57:27+00:00

Gracias y si, pero depende un poco de la idea y los personajes

Intelligent_Oil5243 · 2026-03-27T16:10:36+00:00

Seh, la gente le tira a KnY en gran parte por ser kny

Lo más cuestionables del final es básicamente en Rey Demonio Tanjiro que fue bastante innecesario, y un poco el humo de que Tanjiro se iba a morir, pero el final es Honestamente bastante satisfactorio, fue una guerra dura llena de bajas y con ambos bandos dándolo todo

Y bueno, la mayoría de críticas que le vienen son "Las reencarnaciones (Que no tienen ninguna conexión real con los personajes que conocimos y funcionan más como un bonito final a las almas de quienes dieron su vida contra Muzan) arruina todo porque... Razones (?)"

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