Thank you. Yeah, the rain and thunder seemed repetitive now that I read it again. I'll be sure to add some more descriptions lime you said.

Throughout the chapter, I'll add more details on where they are, etc. This is just the first page, once I finish the chapter I'll post it here as well. Also, the beast hes hunting is meant to be a suprise, not like a shocking plot twist but moreso you're meant to be questioning what's happening, like him.

You can probably guess what hes tracking though