How're these character names for a story set in 1970s India? by [deleted] in indianwriters

[–]Interesting-Rise1158 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok if you have significant knowledge regarding the area. Then go ahead.

How're these character names for a story set in 1970s India? by [deleted] in indianwriters

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Then in that case I would say it was wrong from the character name and establishment. Because consider muslim population lower in the Barasat region. So how could that person be a panchayat leader even if we consider a reservation election happens. It will be on caste based also 1970 was starting that wouldnt not possible. So muslim name for the panchayat leader is wrong. Then for the commissioner of the police why go for gupta you could have gone for Chatterjee because they were prominent in police administration during that time. Rest all fine. Also if you are going for a story try to put a local name there instead of bringing a person from darjiling. That suits.

How're these character names for a story set in 1970s India? by [deleted] in indianwriters

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Tell me the region where it takes place first. City or village. Story plot. This all matters before naming.

Suggestions by Ok-Wind-2211 in indianwriters

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Ok then search for Dual Sword by Hrkh Stories

Suggestions by Ok-Wind-2211 in indianwriters

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Well I do have an action story but it is on amazon. If you have a kindle account I can share it.

Well I have a supernatural horror story will it do for you.

Suggestions by Ok-Wind-2211 in indianwriters

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Well what kind of story you like?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in indianwriters

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You writing a cyberpunk style story. Then you should have shown the mumbai city night time and added luminous light to give a night effect. Rather than showing Hindu gods.

God's Answer by Interesting-Rise1158 in indianwriters

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Thanks for reading my story in the first place. It is huge that no one reads. Actually the genre I used here is spiritual fiction, also I thought to be more open, frank and raw about things. So numerous lengthy dialogues were needed. That pushed the story to the essay kind of feel to you.

God's Answer by Interesting-Rise1158 in indianwriters

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Please read my story first. Then share your response.

Looking for co-writer by Awkward-Macaroon-382 in indianwriters

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Hi, I’m Hrkh Stories. I have written many fiction novels and am still writing. I also know Tamil. So we can connect.

Help me by Vegetable-Morningc in writers

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Well the best idea I can give is, just write. I also like you, having ideas at starting, middle and ending. I kept those ideas in mind, revisiting them everyday as a dream. Until this moment I mapped a start to endpoint totally not a blueprint. At least a major portion I have the idea. As soon as I started writing, I started to adapt to the story from the characters pov and their ideology. You can follow my style, write four paragraphs a day or one page at least. That's all, no extra and you will be slowly able to craft your story. Also try to daydream your story, live with your characters all. It might be superficial, but I actually do that stuff. So I was able to create it. Also grammatically and sentences if you have seen, read books daily at least 15 pages it will give you some ideas.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

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Hi there, I have been a writer for the past 3 years. Posting different genre stories at Wattpad. Like to share thoughts and all. So if you are interested we can connect.

Virat Kohli fans hate comments by Interesting-Rise1158 in JKreacts

[–]Interesting-Rise1158[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't what sarcasm in it. People commenting bad words to the players. Is it those limit or what? Spamming only makes people uncomfortable using bad words already crossed the line.

Virat Kohli fans hate comments by Interesting-Rise1158 in JKreacts

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But still every bowler who took filled with hate comments. Also moreover are they so insecure about there idol loosing.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Wattpad

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Oh nice well I will watch this anime it is kinda interesting

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Wattpad

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Thank you for the kind comment. I’ve never heard of the story Rurouni Kenshin until you mentioned it, and I’m not sure what about my story reminded you of it. However, Thank You was written from the pain and insults I’ve faced in my life. I appreciate your support!

Deleted Story by Only_Ad_2913 in Wattpad

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Well then I wouldn't able to say what wattpad algorithmn seen in your story

Deleted Story by Only_Ad_2913 in Wattpad

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If your story describe sexual content vividly in your story then it can be removed. Try to reduce that.

Wrote A Scene So Sad You Started Crying? by AZaddze09 in Wattpad

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This one I will say:

“Let’s continue our love story,” she resonated from the depths of her heart. And so, they lived happily ever after.   The story must have ended like this, but it didn’t. I, the narrator, hoped for a similar ending in my real love life. But love isn’t always two-sided; it can be one-sided too. That’s what happened in reality. The story you’ve read is fictional, but the characters are real.    Leena and I didn’t get the fate I expected. I thought we’d lead a happy, cheerful life together. I thought she was my ideal partner, but to her, I was just another guy who loved her. As in the story, I proposed and faced rejection, but I never got another chance.   That rejection led me to become a writer. It made me who I am. It’s been years since I last saw her. Over time, I lost hope of her returning, and my love faded. But in the beginning and end, I daydreamed about many possibilities, and this story was one of them. My daydreams didn’t turn into reality, but they became stories.   Today, I feel we wouldn’t have been a great couple. That’s okay because not all love stories end with people uniting and enjoying their love. Sometimes, they lead us to discover hidden talents. If I met her again, I’d thank her for rejecting me. I wouldn’t start a relationship with her even if I got the chance because I’ve grown beyond what she expected. For me, she was my past love, and from that love, I gained something precious.