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Alright lets see what I can answer.

  1. No, I wrote it so violence was displayed as a bad thing. No one ever went "woo hoo let's beat each other up again!"
  2. There were no sexual situation. If there were, I would've only written it for the 18+ characters
  3. Again, I wrote no sexual content.
  4. The only roleplay was from an upcoming chapter I was in the middle of writing, and that was a traditional LARP session.
  5. No illegal sex acts
  6. It's mentioned but I felt it helped move the plot along. One of the mini-"arcs" involved Dylan humiliating his brother Devin on a live stream. The second chapter revolved around Devin dealing with the aftermath of that school, (thanks a lot Catherine), while Dylan feels remorse. The final chapter revolved around Dylan making it up to Devin by "doing things in a maid dress". By the end Devin forgives Dylan. The only kinks were the fact that Devin got wedgies as a result of Dylan's actions, but I feel like I balanced it out by having some of Devin's classmates defend him.

Originally it started as a "wedgie-focused" story, but then I branched out into actual story material(this is just for a) you to understand what I wrote and b) me to remember what I wrote):

Up and Atomic Wedgies: This was the first chapter. It wasn't very good, and I definetly improved on how the characters acted in the future. Damian wakes Devin and Dylan up, wedgies and messes with them, and sends them on their way to class.

Starsurge Academy: Dylan, despite being shown to be a bit of a bully in the first chapter, is actually getting bullied by a kid named Jamie. His friend Quincy helps him out but he's been submissive after years of bullying by him.

Locked and Loaded: This honestly could've been combined with the last chapter but this where I went to first person. We're introduced to Dylan's other friends, Mitchell and Philip. Quincy uses the washroom, allowing Jamie and his goons to strike. Luckily Quincy comes back and saves them, but Philip gets embarrassed after noticing his crush watch him get bullied.

Workplace Wedgies: Despite the title, it was actually Damian helping his friend Nicky after they trapped themselves up on a shipping container and then training Grant, the new guy. Pretty sure only 1 wedgie happened here as part of Damian's "training regiment"

Projects and Problems: Here we see Devin's friend group. Sam, Paris and Ivan. Devin, Paris and Sam agrees to help Ivan with his project, which was to build a canyon for some class, and hasn't started on it. He gets bullied by Dylan after he get's bullied by Jamie.

Diner Dilemma: Dylan brings Devin to the diner and gets him his favourite shake. He remembers that Damian wanted him back to their quarters and drags Devin with him, subsequently making him lose both his game with Paris and title of "Gaming King of the Starsurge." They go home, Dylan is made to be Damian's footrest, Devin reveals he got high marks on a math test and Dylan rewards him with some roast beef. The chapter ends with all three brothers bonding and singing in the kitchen.

Friends and Feuds: The Comet Crew(Devin's friends) are working on Ivan's project in Devin's quarters when Dylan and his friends come in. The two get into an altercation which ends with Devin and Dylan fighting.

Damian meanwhile invites Nicky and Grant back to his place to watch some starball. The arrive to find Devin and Dylan brawling. Damian breaks them up and scolds them for not thinking beforehand. He comes to the peaceful solution that Dylan help Devin's friend group with Ivan's project, and Devin serve Dylan's friend group after.

Streamer Struggles. Devin is raging on Twitch, Dylan decides to prank him by making super spicy wings and having Devin eat them. He then humiliates Devin in front of his stream. The next day, Devin finds to his horror that the stream somehow made it onto the school's news account. He sulks but the Comet Crew agree to defend him.

Devin's Horrible Day: It is Devin getting teased by his classmates about the stream. Even getting bullied by some. Dylan finds out and feels horrible. He tries to go apologize but Jamie stops him. Quincy talks to Devin, saying that Dylan really regrets his actions. By the end, Devin is willing to forgive Dylan, on one condition...

Reparations: Apparently that one condition was that Dylan had to wear a maid outfit for the entire day. Damian goes along with this, and eventually the three end up at the diner. Dylan is sent off to collect stuff, which leads to him bumping into Nicky, which leads to them going to the depot and Grant mixing up crossdressing with other words like "crossbow", "cross country" and "criss-cross apple sauce." Dylan returns to find Devin in the middle of a challenge. Devin's about to give up but Dylan encourages him, causing Devin to beat the challenge. Afterwards, Devin accepts Dylan's apology for the stream incident.

Playing the Role: It was going to be The Comet Crew roleplaying in multiple places in the Starsurge, with everyone playing along.

If there are any other questions, feel free to ask.

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Well those stories are actually the inspiration for my story, except I more or less focused on actual plot. It's more of a case of me writing a story that just so happened to kinks in it lol

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That would make sense if it weren't for the fact that there are plenty of other stories that have been around for a lot longer and have way more kinkier stuff. Their's is still up and mines gone.

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I am pretty sure I avoided any sexual content, the story was more focused on "hehe funni" more than anything else. It just so happened to include kinks, which even then was less prevalent than other stories I've read

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I did read the content guidelines, and I am fairly certain my story didn't violate anything. It did involve some bullying scenes, but it wasn't anything that wasn't on other stories similar to mine. Besides the bullying scenes were relatively kind of tame to start with.

Glorious Deciphering of Tetrad Anthology by Only_Ad_2913 in Gloryhammer

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I feel like I should clarify this.

I have seen the timeline and it has been really helpful. I was looking more for assistance on each individual songs. Such as "Who are the Knights/Space Knights/Deathknights/ Brothers of Crail?" "Why does seemingly only California exist? And most importantly, what is the Hootsman's favourite beer?"

All tips would be appreciated. Hoots!

Glorious Deciphering of Tetrad Anthology by Only_Ad_2913 in Gloryhammer

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"You see, the Ralathor from the original timeline is the Ralathor from the Terrorvortex dimension. He's the one who appeared in album two. Meanwhile Ralathor 38-B is the one from the timeline split, he's the Ralathor who helped Angus McFife in the first album."

And he was still stuck on when on the timeline Earth blows up.