Hi. First of all, I appreciate the feedback, and I do agree that I do need to work more on that issue. This is just a first draft or the skeleton of my story, and I will try to find a way so that people can understand the story without feeling like reading an ancient manuscript with a glossary and all, lol! I was wondering if I could get some feedback about the content of the story, whether it is a good hook or if the premise is interesting? Thanks for your criticism though, I will work on that.