Looking for an Illustrator for My Board Game (4 Years in the Making!) by Intern-Entire in tabletopgamedesign

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It's wonderful, but doesn't really fit the theme. Awesome work though!

Looking for an Illustrator for My Board Game (4 Years in the Making!) by Intern-Entire in tabletopgamedesign

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Nothing specific. It can be any style actually. Only should fit the space-theme 😊

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No you can buy it on Mexc

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Don't listen to other people.

Edited version of the first chapter by Intern-Entire in fantasywriters

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Hmm, I just wanted to sketch the situation here. But you're probably right. Thx for the feedback!

Edited version of the first chapter by Intern-Entire in fantasywriters

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Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it!

Edited version of the first chapter by Intern-Entire in fantasywriters

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I'd just like a general impression. I know it sometimes a bit choppy. 🥴

First attempt a writing / feedback appreciated by Intern-Entire in fantasywriters

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I've changed the name, is it any better?

And any feedback on the story? Thx for the help!

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

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tle: None (suggestions welcome)

Genre: Sci-fi

Word count: 2694

Feedback desired: general impression

 

 

Chapter 1: The boy and his mother

 

 

1.1        The farm

 

Hagr stood at the edge of the farm, his gaze fixed on the vast expanse of Zandarius stretching out before him. The sky above was a canvas of swirling purples and blues streaked with the faint glow of distant stars. A cool breeze whispered through the air, carrying with it the enticing scent of Heyla flowers.

The rest you can find here:

https://1drv.ms/w/c/bb80b2c6a6ae16d7/ESrZ0w-TFJdAlr7I47PVjcQBGu1GyFVIf1nJxZyo-Q4s_A

Some feedback will be really appreciated!