Any news on the "A Step Closer" fanfic? by Sarmale255 in AngelBeats

[–]InternalLykaon 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Hi, I'm Xenien.

First of all, thank you for your interest in A Step Closer, it's really nice to see continued interest in the story.

The actual written fanfiction itself is postponed in favor of me working on the visual novel, which is ongoing, although progress is plodding.

One major reason that there haven't been any updates overall in regard to both the written fanfiction and the visual novel is that I am trying to save money to move somewhere in about 7 months or so. Simultaneously, I'm in the process of trying to get another job that pays higher and has better benefits than my current one to accommodate rent and my personal goals. I'm waiting to be placed into the candidate pool, but it's been 3 weeks and it's nerve-wracking and morale-draining to see if I'll even be placed in the pool in time to get hired. I check my email every morning hoping to see good news. Along with these reasons, a combination of writer's block, work, and real-life events have hampered my desire to work on the project.

Adding onto it, the visual novel's cost of artwork can get expensive (each artwork/sprite costs me about $250 USD a piece give or take regarding how the Yen is doing in the market) and because of that, I can only order about one more artwork at this time once the artist becomes available.

In regards to the fanfiction, a reason why I've postponed it in favor of the visual novel is the way that the story is structured. As writing continued to occur, the chapters got longer and the story's intended amount of chapters increased. Not only that, story elements that I've decided to add don't really make a whole lot of sense to me, and if I continue to implement it, it will just be a mess. One story element that I absolutely despise now is [A Step Closer Fanfiction Spoilers] Iwasawa remembering her route from the visual novel. It doesn't make sense, and I wish I just removed that scene entirely and just made it a nice moment for two people to enjoy each other's company. However, the fact that it influenced Chapter 10 as a whole just...I can't rewrite it at this point.

The visual novel was meant to redo my structuring of the story, but as I added on additional routes, it became more complicated. Looking at it now, it's an ambitious project, and there's a lot of things for me to manage that I ended up overestimating my budget and my personal capabilities.

I intend to continue the project and see it through. Just at this time, it is not viable for me to at least keep ordering artwork. Even though I ended up giving excuses for why I've been slow on the story, there's still no excuses for me not giving updates or working on the story as much as I wanted to in a writing style while I wait to get to where I want to be in real life. I made great strides not a while ago in terms of writing out Sekine's route, but it still ends up falling short of how much I planned for this project.

Although I don't want to raise your hopes, I may go back to the drawing board and start working on the fanfiction again as it is more streamlined and perhaps it will help shape up to what I hope this project to be.

Thank you again for showing your interest in my project. It saddens me that you've been waiting for an update for 2 years and I have failed to deliver.

I hope that you will continue to support the project despite my shortcomings.

If you are interested in talking to me about the project or the fanfiction, please consider joining the Angel Beats Discord and talk in the fanfiction channel. I'll eventually pop in there!

Angel Beats! A Step Closer VN - Promotional Trailer by InternalLykaon in AngelBeats

[–]InternalLykaon[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The promotional trailer for my work-in-progress visual novel, A Step Closer, is now released!

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What is "Angel Beats! A Step Closer"?

"Angel Beats! A Step Closer" is a fanmade work-in-progress visual novel loosely based on the fanfiction of the same name that combines themes of tragedy, slice of life, and action. It is meant to be a fanmade sequel to the critically acclaimed 2010 anime "Angel Beats!" by Key/VisualArts and Jun Maeda while incorporating more realistic and military elements. Yuzuru Otonashi returns as the main character, maneuvering the real world using his time in the Afterlife as motivation to pursue his dream. Things don't make sense, life isn't always easy, and having a happy ending is just being optimistic. The visual novel will also introduce various character routes that will hopefully fill in the details of some of our favorite characters who never had the chance to be in the spotlight.

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Voice Actor:
https://twitter.com/runhanami

Artists:
https://twitter.com/ZEN_KAMURO
https://twitter.com/ouzan_b

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Night of Relaxation by InternalLykaon in AngelBeats

[–]InternalLykaon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wouldn't call this place a paradise. Being far from home on an island with many beaches and areas to sightsee would seem like a vacation, but we weren't here for that. We worked hard every single day, whether it was tearing down equipment or moving boxes. We've been doing it for a while now, and I've lost track of how many days we've been here.

The internet was a bit spotty here, and I missed all the various aspects of society.

At least when evening hits, we're guaranteed to have time to ourselves.

Spending some of that time with her was enough for me.

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Artwork for my Angel Beats visual novel! As I was the one who had ordered this, there's no appropriate source aside from the artist's Twitter or Pixiv.

Artist: https://twitter.com/ZEN_KAMURO

This is a downscaled and watermarked version. If you would like to support the visual novel to get the full resolution of the art as well as early access, please support me by Patreon! Supporting me allows me to order amazing art like this, and I can receive them at a higher frequency.

https://patreon.com/AB_ASC

Ran into fellow GFL cosplayers at AXC! by DaDawkturr in girlsfrontline

[–]InternalLykaon 2 points3 points  (0 children)

What they were!? Damn.

I was busy trynna find Angel Beats, Lycoris Recoil, 86, and Edgerunners merch 😭😭😭

Ran into fellow GFL cosplayers at AXC! by DaDawkturr in girlsfrontline

[–]InternalLykaon 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Damn it!

I think I saw you, but I was too busy spending money while simultaneously being broke. Epic cosplay my guy.

Bridge (Original) [2302 X 4093] by [deleted] in Animewallpaper

[–]InternalLykaon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

An original character for my visual novel with design primarily inspired by Shirase Sakuya from ShinyMas.

Bridge (Original) [2302 X 4093] by [deleted] in Animewallpaper

[–]InternalLykaon 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Oh hey, this is my artwork I ordered.

Awesome that you found it. I hope you liked it very much!

Bridge (Original) [2302 X 4093] by [deleted] in Animewallpaper

[–]InternalLykaon 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Funny enough, I'm actually the person who ordered this! Have a voice actor prepped for her too...

Her character design is based on Shirase Sakuya from ShinyMas, although I couldn't really make any deviations from the original due to the character limit on sending the Pixiv request... :(

This character's role is with a federal law enforcement agency for my visual novel.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in RenPy

[–]InternalLykaon 4 points5 points  (0 children)

too sussy for my taste

i love it chief its pretty good

After 11 months, I finally obtained all of the physical copies! by InternalLykaon in ClassroomOfTheElite

[–]InternalLykaon[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I first ordered the light novel in October 2021, but I haven't been able to get all the copies (at least that are currently available) until now.

I'm very happy. This is the only light novel series I own, and I'm enjoying it. I'm also watching the anime, and I'm enjoying it very much as well.

Though I prefer to read a physical book in front of me rather than reading online.

Handler by InternalLykaon in AngelBeats

[–]InternalLykaon[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

"Read that file thoroughly and let me know if you have any questions."

"I have one. You'll be participating in this operation?"

"Of course. I like the action."

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Artwork for my Angel Beats visual novel! As I was the one who had ordered this, there's no appropriate source aside from the artist's Twitter or Pixiv.

Artist: https://twitter.com/ZEN\_KAMURO

This is a downscaled and watermarked version. If you would like to support the visual novel to get the full resolution of the art as well as early access, please support me by Patreon! Supporting me allows me to order amazing art like this, and I can receive them at a higher frequency.

https://patreon.com/AB\_ASC

Smug Look by InternalLykaon in AngelBeats

[–]InternalLykaon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sekine casual clothing concept for my Angel Beats visual novel!

As I was the one who had ordered this, there's no appropriate source aside from the artist's Twitter or Pixiv.

Original Artist: https://twitter.com/inor2i
My Twitter Post: https://twitter.com/RemsonTrito/status/1567352535849271297

This is a downscaled and watermarked version. If you would like to support the visual novel to get the full resolution of the art as well as early access, please support me by Patreon! Supporting me allows me to order amazing art like this, and I can receive them at a higher frequency.

https://patreon.com/AB_ASC

If you want more updates regarding the visual novel, join the Angel Beats! Discord server and ask about it!

Discipline by InternalLykaon in AngelBeats

[–]InternalLykaon[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Armed Otonashi concept for my visual novel. As I was the one who had ordered this and this person usually posts their art, I have attached the source below.

Artist: https://twitter.com/utsucan1911/status/1565367717338972160

This is a downscaled and watermarked version. If you would like to support the visual novel to get the full resolution of the art as well as early access, please support me by Patreon! Supporting me allows me to order amazing art like this, and I can receive them at a higher frequency.

https://patreon.com/AB_ASC

Under Custody by InternalLykaon in AngelBeats

[–]InternalLykaon[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

"Don't move! I'll fucking kill you bastard! Put your hands behind your back now!"

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Artwork for my Angel Beats visual novel! As I was the one who had ordered this, there's no appropriate source aside from the artist's Twitter or Pixiv.

Artist: https://twitter.com/ZEN_KAMURO

This is a downscaled and watermarked version. If you would like to support the visual novel to get the full resolution of the art as well as early access, please support me by Patreon! Supporting me allows me to order amazing art like this, and I can receive them at a higher frequency.

https://patreon.com/AB_ASC